Reviews for Wizard Kingpin
sticdom6 chapter 1 . 12/31/2024
If only we could pay the guy or gal to continue the story I’m pretty sure a lot of other fanfics would still be around
Guest chapter 7 . 10/7/2024
old bastard dumbles i detest him his hubis stinks playing god hes a joke old dumbles
Guest chapter 5 . 10/6/2024
old antichrist pure evil child abuser old gay arse bandit dumbles twaty
Guest chapter 4 . 10/6/2024
child abuser theif oath breaker dumbles especable old man
Mindan Bret'c'hell chapter 28 . 8/21/2024
I know this has been abandoned but its such a pity as its a fantastic story. Re-reading for the 3rd or4th time.
Luka K chapter 28 . 6/25/2024
Awesome fic, great work - excellent!
boredasf13 chapter 5 . 2/10/2024
what does a wand lenght say about a witch or a wizard? i feel longer wand woods are with people with more personality...lol, if so that says a lot about harry
Fredward1 chapter 28 . 2/1/2024
Nigga did you die?
Fill-them-up chapter 28 . 11/5/2023
Good story but need to be updated
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 28 . 6/26/2023
Someone really should have infected Umbridge too.

Her selfhatred might make her the next Hitler tho, so I guess maybe not. Still, it would be poetic justice.

On tge other hand, that level of blind hate she has is usually beyond normal predjudice. It has a story behind it.

A story of something horrible happening, or childhood poverty, her parents or lover dying or loosing their jobs... in a way that makes it possible (if not always logical) to blame the creatures she hate.

I read a good story where Grayback was her loving fiance, who lost his mind and went feral and hating all mankind after being bitten by a crazy wolf. That's one option.

That said, I LOVE this story!

I really, REALLY hope you plan to write more! _
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 14 . 6/25/2023
Rita is a bit suspiciously positive...

Have you considered using the Sirius thing to tear down Crouch for throwing a Pureblood in hail with no trial?

Ir DOES sent a dangerous precedence, which causes other purebloods to buy newspaper from fear, and it also makes gossipers froth at the mouth over such a high profile case AND an ancient pureblood line like the Blacks being treated that way AND another scandal to Croutch.

(Technically also to Bagnold, as the minister back then.)

Rital loves to build up people she favors, but she also tears down people she dislike.

Even PotterWiki has her down as biased as Hell. EVERYONE knows she is. Yet they still believe her.

(She also hates dumbledore. And proves that the biased view we get by watching dumbledore's favorites worshipping him doesn not equal EVERYONE doing the same. He has his enemies. Many of them.)

Anyway. I really love this story. _
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 6 . 6/24/2023
I halfway expected Harry to say;

"I thought it prudent to read the school rules before comming. It would be terrible if I broke a rule and didn't even know it!"

McGonnical looked like she was about to have a heart-attack at that statement, if the shock on her face was anything to go by.

But it was true. He'd rather not break a rule by accident.

INTENTIONAL rulebreaking on the other hand..."

Anyway.

I LOVE this story, and I look forward to read the rest of it.
ManticoreBlues chapter 28 . 3/21/2023
I absolutely love this fanfic and hope you plan to keep this amazing story going3
Callum Runchman chapter 28 . 2/21/2023
This was hilarious. I loved seeing the somewhat manipulative evil Harry who's basically just making the world a better place even if it is through cruel methods. Shame this wasn't continued as I was looking forward to seeing the Death Eaters have their loyalty split and no idea who to follow when voldy returned.
ShadowLord1329 chapter 12 . 1/23/2023
it's trial not trail
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