|Reviews for Wizard Kingpin|
| Fill-them-up chapter 28 . 11/5
Good story but need to be updated
| Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 28 . 6/26
Someone really should have infected Umbridge too.
Her selfhatred might make her the next Hitler tho, so I guess maybe not. Still, it would be poetic justice.
On tge other hand, that level of blind hate she has is usually beyond normal predjudice. It has a story behind it.
A story of something horrible happening, or childhood poverty, her parents or lover dying or loosing their jobs... in a way that makes it possible (if not always logical) to blame the creatures she hate.
I read a good story where Grayback was her loving fiance, who lost his mind and went feral and hating all mankind after being bitten by a crazy wolf. That's one option.
That said, I LOVE this story!
I really, REALLY hope you plan to write more! _
| Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 14 . 6/25
Rita is a bit suspiciously positive...
Have you considered using the Sirius thing to tear down Crouch for throwing a Pureblood in hail with no trial?
Ir DOES sent a dangerous precedence, which causes other purebloods to buy newspaper from fear, and it also makes gossipers froth at the mouth over such a high profile case AND an ancient pureblood line like the Blacks being treated that way AND another scandal to Croutch.
(Technically also to Bagnold, as the minister back then.)
Rital loves to build up people she favors, but she also tears down people she dislike.
Even PotterWiki has her down as biased as Hell. EVERYONE knows she is. Yet they still believe her.
(She also hates dumbledore. And proves that the biased view we get by watching dumbledore's favorites worshipping him doesn not equal EVERYONE doing the same. He has his enemies. Many of them.)
Anyway. I really love this story. _
| Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 6 . 6/24
I halfway expected Harry to say;
"I thought it prudent to read the school rules before comming. It would be terrible if I broke a rule and didn't even know it!"
McGonnical looked like she was about to have a heart-attack at that statement, if the shock on her face was anything to go by.
But it was true. He'd rather not break a rule by accident.
INTENTIONAL rulebreaking on the other hand..."
I LOVE this story, and I look forward to read the rest of it.
| ManticoreBlues chapter 28 . 3/21
I absolutely love this fanfic and hope you plan to keep this amazing story going3
| Callum Runchman chapter 28 . 2/21
This was hilarious. I loved seeing the somewhat manipulative evil Harry who's basically just making the world a better place even if it is through cruel methods. Shame this wasn't continued as I was looking forward to seeing the Death Eaters have their loyalty split and no idea who to follow when voldy returned.
| ShadowLord1329 chapter 12 . 1/23
it's trial not trail
| Bronze chapter 2 . 1/15
I figure it'll take some time before they turn to a Curse Braker to remove Harry's scar. But, if as in other fics, Good Ole Fumblemort has a monitor keyed to it he'll know as soon as anything is done to remove the Soul Shard within it. I'd never expect him to do anything about it. After all, he wasted no time in getting Harry to the Dursleys after Harry's parents were murdered. He certainly did nothing to remove it when it was fresh. And thus, why would anyone expect him to do anything that would actually help Harry? Now the Jacobs on the other hand have told Harry the truth about his parents, gotten him seen by a Healer who will correct all the damage done to him while living with the Dursleys. That is more than the so-called Leader of the Light has done for Harry for the past six or so years. And which is going to frost Fumblemorts' ass greatly when Harry goes to Hogwash. Yes, I do consider it at the very least a third-rate school! What with three of the core classes as jokes at best, and the Headmaster bringing exceptionally danger objects into the so-called school for the flimsiest of excuses that endanger the entire student body, how could it be anything else?
| Bronze chapter 1 . 1/15
Oh, poor, poor Fumblemort! He has no idea what leaving Harry with the Dursleys will lead to! I like the idea of a magical family taking in and training Harry to take control of the magical world. I hope he gives Good Ole Fumblemort a Bleeding Ulcer like no one ever developed before! If Vernon should have an accident someday soon, nothing fatal mind you, just painful and with a short hospital stay, he could likely be convinced to completely lay off abusing Harry. After all, if he didn't, the next time could land him in the hospital for a few months. After that it could prove fatal. A major Heart Attack that killed him and who'd look at it twice? Vernon is way too overweight to be healthy. Hell, they might need a Forklift or a crane to put him in the ground because of his weight!
| seaweedbrainwisegirl07 chapter 10 . 1/8
Wow, that was a unique approach to trick Fuffly's weakness out of Hagrid without raising his suspicion.
| Maverick chapter 28 . 10/28/2022
great story, please update!
| Ken106348 chapter 9 . 10/22/2022
Stock doesn't become invalid.
| demon87 chapter 28 . 8/31/2022
| CrocDoctor chapter 1 . 8/5/2022
“ i would not be surprised if you were not the best duelist of first years” lmao mans had voldemorts memories for over four years the fuck has he been doing twiddling his dick? Idc if it would make your story shorter or whatever. But be fucking realistic. He would fuck shit up if he had his memories for four years that he could peruse at Leisure.
| Eeyore3061 chapter 28 . 8/2/2022
And .. AND .. *aaannd*?!
"We're waiting..." ;)