Reviews for Wizard Kingpin
Little-Miss-Repo chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
You have more than a little bit of my attention with just the first chapter. Please update soon.
Chaos Cain chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Seems interesting. I have always been looking for a good criminal Harry Potter story but never found a good one that went beyond a couple of chapters. Great idea. Keep writing!
Corwalch chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
Interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing how this story develops. Harry Potter as the Johnny Marcone of the magical world should be interesting to see.
Iceflame55 chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
You've got my attention :). Also, I noticed your story picture, and that suggests manga/anime interest!
coduss chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
could be good, faved and followed
Lightningblade49 chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
I really like how this is shaping up, the wizard world wont know what hit them.
delenda est c chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
I adore this story . Thank you .
Sweet Smiles chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
loving it! more please.,.
Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
This is an absolutely amazing beginning. I seriousky love everything about it.

I have only one reservation, and that is in regards to the future pairing, this feels like its going to turn into yet another Harry/Daphne fic, I am soooo burnt out on that pairing, if I see the words ice queen one more time ill vomit.

Personally I would find it much more interesting to see him slowly corrupt Hermione to his way of thinking and operating, could you imagine what she could do if she put her mind to it in that business...God.

Imagine her operating an escort service as the head Madam, see her pimping girls out and making bank like crazy, while making sure the girls are very well cared for.

Thanks so much for sharing, I eagerly await your next.
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