Reviews for Wizard Kingpin
EpilogueLover chapter 12 . 8/24/2020
Gorgeously written. Some spelling mistakes but the Well-driven plot makes them not matter much!
EpilogueLover chapter 10 . 8/24/2020
I read another story about Harry Potter being an artificerseems that this map is a true artifact even if it is in the minor league!
EpilogueLover chapter 9 . 8/24/2020
Your topic for skeeter's delectation/to sink her interest into is so original and juicy! Love that you aren't going the puerile harem with big boobs route!
EpilogueLover chapter 8 . 8/24/2020
I like hp's relationships with his elves! Remember piqued not peaked/peeked.
EpilogueLover chapter 5 . 8/24/2020
Piqued not peaked but awesome chapter nonetheless!
EpilogueLover chapter 3 . 8/24/2020
Hope you liked crafting your own original characters... They make you as powerful as jkr!
EpilogueLover chapter 1 . 8/24/2020
Intriguing start. I hope you will finish this story in one sitting or at least outline your original thoughts for how this ff was to originally end!
Damian Magecraft chapter 27 . 8/22/2020
interesting solution to the Werewolf legislation...

I just discovered this one.
I do hope you plan to continue it.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2020
Fj
JoeFred chapter 3 . 8/18/2020
I am enjoying your story very much. However, I thought I would point out a geography/history oops. The lost colony was located on Roanoke Island which is a small island located in the Outer Banks area of North Carolina. Roanoke, Virginia is a fairly large city in south western Virginia in the Blue Ridge Mountains. Other than a similar name, the two do not share a history. Cheers.
luckydarkpage chapter 27 . 8/15/2020
This is a very unique take on someone else raising Harry Potter. I'm really loving this I can't wait to see what happens next.
Midots chapter 27 . 8/11/2020
What would Voldie meet when he comes out? would Harry be strong enough for Bella when he plans to take her out? Harry's major successes are based in the fact that he is continually underestimated.
great read. thanks for sharing. please update soon.
azizapatton91 chapter 27 . 8/7/2020
Can u get an update I love this story!
CthuluWarlock chapter 27 . 8/5/2020
Good stuff i cant wait to see how harrys schemes pan out !
Confused chapter 17 . 8/4/2020
Voldemort shouldn't be a big deal. All Harry has to do is look into his memories for how Tom didn't die, then get rid of the horcruxes. Voldemort himself may be an issue but the horcruxes Harry should find out about and eliminate immediately. Maybe even do the ritual again to save the Diadem's enchantments.
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