Reviews for Wizard Kingpin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Gorgeously written. Some spelling mistakes but the Well-driven plot makes them not matter much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read another story about Harry Potter being an artificerseems that this map is a true artifact even if it is in the minor league! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your topic for skeeter's delectation/to sink her interest into is so original and juicy! Love that you aren't going the puerile harem with big boobs route! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like hp's relationships with his elves! Remember piqued not peaked/peeked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Piqued not peaked but awesome chapter nonetheless! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you liked crafting your own original characters... They make you as powerful as jkr! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing start. I hope you will finish this story in one sitting or at least outline your original thoughts for how this ff was to originally end! |
![]() ![]() interesting solution to the Werewolf legislation... I just discovered this one. I do hope you plan to continue it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am enjoying your story very much. However, I thought I would point out a geography/history oops. The lost colony was located on Roanoke Island which is a small island located in the Outer Banks area of North Carolina. Roanoke, Virginia is a fairly large city in south western Virginia in the Blue Ridge Mountains. Other than a similar name, the two do not share a history. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very unique take on someone else raising Harry Potter. I'm really loving this I can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What would Voldie meet when he comes out? would Harry be strong enough for Bella when he plans to take her out? Harry's major successes are based in the fact that he is continually underestimated. great read. thanks for sharing. please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can u get an update I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good stuff i cant wait to see how harrys schemes pan out ! |
![]() ![]() Voldemort shouldn't be a big deal. All Harry has to do is look into his memories for how Tom didn't die, then get rid of the horcruxes. Voldemort himself may be an issue but the horcruxes Harry should find out about and eliminate immediately. Maybe even do the ritual again to save the Diadem's enchantments. |