Reviews for Wizard Kingpin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() If elder Potter's enclosed themselves in the manor, when, where and who did the burying? And did Harry really skip the rest of the first year and part of second when he mentioned that he was looking forward to third year in his mid-term review? |
![]() ![]() ![]() How on earth did this child's age jump from 6 to 8? |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter. Thank you for continuing to share this story. Keep writing. blessings and good health to you and your loved ones. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() Cant wait to see what Harry does with an expanded trunk and a few elves... pot farm? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done! To anyone thinking of reading this story, know that this is nowhere near the typical slightly "Grey/Dark Harry" tale. I read a lot of HP fan fiction and there is a freshness to this work. It is not the same old story dressed it a new set of clothes. It seems that Harry seems to do good even if it was not his intention or motivation. I highly recommend this effort. I would like to caution this writer. At the beginning of your story you made reference to Harry learning all the businesses including the whores. You have not mentioned them since. Prostitution is the oldest profession human trafficking is in many peoples opinion is the ugliest. I would suggest you steer clear of this and stick to the older but wiser type ladies. It might even be a place that offers old guard ladies, looking for a little fun, polyjuiced as high class hookers. I just would not get too explicit. It would be fun to see Lucius accidental hire Narcissa polyjuced for an evening of passion. Thank you for sharing with us your time, talents and imagination. |
![]() ![]() I really cant take seriously any adult still screaming incantations. Ever heard of silent casting? It makes for a great way to enrich your writing and expanding your imagination about what a magical fight could be instead of this crap slinging childish spells one after another |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the new chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this plan. Ruthless Harry. Hehe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay new chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was crazy, exciting, and damn good. Harry is a true Ravenclaw and is getting things done. It would be cool to bring Luna in the group but only time will tell. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really like the new chapter, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun and intriguing tale! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |