Reviews for Wizard Kingpin
Bronze chapter 2 . 1/15/2023
I figure it'll take some time before they turn to a Curse Braker to remove Harry's scar. But, if as in other fics, Good Ole Fumblemort has a monitor keyed to it he'll know as soon as anything is done to remove the Soul Shard within it. I'd never expect him to do anything about it. After all, he wasted no time in getting Harry to the Dursleys after Harry's parents were murdered. He certainly did nothing to remove it when it was fresh. And thus, why would anyone expect him to do anything that would actually help Harry? Now the Jacobs on the other hand have told Harry the truth about his parents, gotten him seen by a Healer who will correct all the damage done to him while living with the Dursleys. That is more than the so-called Leader of the Light has done for Harry for the past six or so years. And which is going to frost Fumblemorts' ass greatly when Harry goes to Hogwash. Yes, I do consider it at the very least a third-rate school! What with three of the core classes as jokes at best, and the Headmaster bringing exceptionally danger objects into the so-called school for the flimsiest of excuses that endanger the entire student body, how could it be anything else?
Bronze chapter 1 . 1/15/2023
Oh, poor, poor Fumblemort! He has no idea what leaving Harry with the Dursleys will lead to! I like the idea of a magical family taking in and training Harry to take control of the magical world. I hope he gives Good Ole Fumblemort a Bleeding Ulcer like no one ever developed before! If Vernon should have an accident someday soon, nothing fatal mind you, just painful and with a short hospital stay, he could likely be convinced to completely lay off abusing Harry. After all, if he didn't, the next time could land him in the hospital for a few months. After that it could prove fatal. A major Heart Attack that killed him and who'd look at it twice? Vernon is way too overweight to be healthy. Hell, they might need a Forklift or a crane to put him in the ground because of his weight!
The-Geek-Who-Lived chapter 10 . 1/8/2023
Wow, that was a unique approach to trick Fuffly's weakness out of Hagrid without raising his suspicion.
Maverick chapter 28 . 10/28/2022
great story, please update!
Ken106348 chapter 9 . 10/22/2022
Stock doesn't become invalid.
demon87 chapter 28 . 8/31/2022
Very super
CrocDoctor chapter 1 . 8/5/2022
“ i would not be surprised if you were not the best duelist of first years” lmao mans had voldemorts memories for over four years the fuck has he been doing twiddling his dick? Idc if it would make your story shorter or whatever. But be fucking realistic. He would fuck shit up if he had his memories for four years that he could peruse at Leisure.
Eeyore3061 chapter 28 . 8/2/2022
And .. AND .. *aaannd*?!
"We're waiting..." ;)
Aratherfluffyfatcat chapter 28 . 7/23/2022
Enjoying the story thanks
Guest chapter 5 . 6/27/2022
that could have been the case harry could be neutral
Isaac Young-Star chapter 28 . 6/14/2022
I do hope you come back to finish this story.
Efthee chapter 16 . 5/6/2022
lmao i didnt realize harry actually straight up stole the mirror. haha what a riot
Lord Harry Potter-Black chapter 28 . 2/21/2022
When is the next update likely to be?
Sebine chapter 6 . 2/2/2022
"Here the Fred"
nice typos...
Sebine chapter 2 . 1/30/2022
got some grammar problems but overall good
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