Reviews for Wizard Kingpin |
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![]() ![]() I figure it'll take some time before they turn to a Curse Braker to remove Harry's scar. But, if as in other fics, Good Ole Fumblemort has a monitor keyed to it he'll know as soon as anything is done to remove the Soul Shard within it. I'd never expect him to do anything about it. After all, he wasted no time in getting Harry to the Dursleys after Harry's parents were murdered. He certainly did nothing to remove it when it was fresh. And thus, why would anyone expect him to do anything that would actually help Harry? Now the Jacobs on the other hand have told Harry the truth about his parents, gotten him seen by a Healer who will correct all the damage done to him while living with the Dursleys. That is more than the so-called Leader of the Light has done for Harry for the past six or so years. And which is going to frost Fumblemorts' ass greatly when Harry goes to Hogwash. Yes, I do consider it at the very least a third-rate school! What with three of the core classes as jokes at best, and the Headmaster bringing exceptionally danger objects into the so-called school for the flimsiest of excuses that endanger the entire student body, how could it be anything else? |
![]() ![]() Oh, poor, poor Fumblemort! He has no idea what leaving Harry with the Dursleys will lead to! I like the idea of a magical family taking in and training Harry to take control of the magical world. I hope he gives Good Ole Fumblemort a Bleeding Ulcer like no one ever developed before! If Vernon should have an accident someday soon, nothing fatal mind you, just painful and with a short hospital stay, he could likely be convinced to completely lay off abusing Harry. After all, if he didn't, the next time could land him in the hospital for a few months. After that it could prove fatal. A major Heart Attack that killed him and who'd look at it twice? Vernon is way too overweight to be healthy. Hell, they might need a Forklift or a crane to put him in the ground because of his weight! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was a unique approach to trick Fuffly's weakness out of Hagrid without raising his suspicion. |
![]() ![]() great story, please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stock doesn't become invalid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very super |
![]() ![]() ![]() “ i would not be surprised if you were not the best duelist of first years” lmao mans had voldemorts memories for over four years the fuck has he been doing twiddling his dick? Idc if it would make your story shorter or whatever. But be fucking realistic. He would fuck shit up if he had his memories for four years that he could peruse at Leisure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And .. AND .. *aaannd*?! "We're waiting..." ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the story thanks |
![]() ![]() that could have been the case harry could be neutral |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope you come back to finish this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao i didnt realize harry actually straight up stole the mirror. haha what a riot |
![]() ![]() ![]() When is the next update likely to be? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Here the Fred" nice typos... |
![]() ![]() ![]() got some grammar problems but overall good |