| Reviews for Wizard Kingpin |
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   xxxLeanniexxx chapter 28 . 1/8/2022 Interesting strategy |
| Diametrik chapter 3 . 1/3/2022 I thought they made all of Harry's healers take secrecy oaths, yet somehow he has gained the attention of the 7 leaders of the magical government? |
| CamiMelo chapter 22 . 12/24/2021 Simplesmente ótima. É tão diferente e com novas idéias |
| CarolWim chapter 28 . 11/26/2021 Great story with refreshing new ideas from the author. |
| JamieO1 chapter 28 . 11/15/2021 Pretty good story. I appreciate the summation of canon events, so we can get to the more interesting things that are going on outside of Hogwarts. Other than that I would say find a proof reader, but good job. Is this story still being worked on or is it dead? |
| Hippothestrowl chapter 17 . 10/29/2021 The start of this fic was the most original and more enjoyable. At Hogwarts it became diluted by all the old stuff so not so good. There's enough new material to add a bit of interest, but it's a shame that Harry still dances to Dumbledore's tune. - Hip |
| Hippothestrowl chapter 3 . 10/28/2021 Necessary I suppose but not quite so fascinating chapter for me and seemed rather slow. I've done at least one 'scar-soul-removal' scene in one of my own stories but vastly shorter than this. I've read so many - mostly by the goblins - that one more is not a big deal for me. But if this were an original story rather than a fan fic then it would probably be a great chapter. And, of course, this was only the preparation for the rituals! So, two long chapters of soul removal? Mmm... - Hip |
| Hippothestrowl chapter 2 . 10/28/2021 Excellent. Very readable. It's so refreshing to read a good original Potter fic for a change. - Hip |
| Hippothestrowl chapter 1 . 10/28/2021 Very original and fascinating start. Some grammatical errors but the writing is pretty good, and anyway, it's the story interest that matters. I'm curious to see how this develops, which is how all good stories should start but so few do. - Hip |
| SurplusHook chapter 28 . 10/5/2021 Love your story really like your idea not seen it much |
| Jabari the Goat Sage chapter 10 . 7/20/2021 WHY?! Why does he need to see pass Fluffy? |
| Jabari the Goat Sage chapter 8 . 7/20/2021 Jesus Christ! Can I read ONE fic where Harry isn’t buttfucked by wizard travel? |
| Kaiimei chapter 14 . 7/19/2021 I mean, Guten Morgen and Wunderbar aren't accented English, they are outright German instead of English, but whatever. |
| Jonyonny chapter 13 . 7/14/2021 amazing story so far, gotta say I'm hoping for some HHr soon but I'll be finishing your work either way. also your "As a fanfiction author I reserve the right to do whatever the hell I want," statement got a nice chuckle out of me when I read it lol cheers |
| nymlover chapter 28 . 6/10/2021 great story well done |