Ruby now reminds me of the Locust queen in Gears of war. No love for mankind, ready to slaughter thousands, millions, billions, to suit her needs. The difference? Ruby once was human and instead of emotionless armies with guns? Emotionless animals that evolve with fear, hate, darkness.
But hey, every rose needs thorns to save it from those who would pluck it away.

As a direct relative to Monty, allow me to say thank you. It always means a lot to my family and I when someone acknowledges how great his work was.

Do you still have the version that people hate? If so, and you are willimg to let me see it, please PM me ASAP. If it is hateable, then I'll shut up, but I dont think it's possible to make me hate this story right now

I'm excited to see the new ending. I only found this recently, so I started reading after the original ending got taken down, and I don't want to read the sequel until I've read the new ending, that way I have proper context for what's happening and don't spoil anything for myself.

I love this story. You sir have earned yourself a favorite on this story and as a writer. Can't wait for the last chapter of red queen to be redone. Keep up the great writing!

I loved the original ending you had ad its a shame people didn't like it. I think you should leave the original ending up and had another chapter be a alternate ending because I really like the original and I'm sure a lot of others do too

I realy like this story I hope you make the chapter

I'm trying to get into this story, but Ruby's just… wrong. She's not the type for revenge, even for conspiracy for her own murder. And she's nowhere near capable of the kind of power you've given her.

Those two things are done a lot, and usually quite badly. But even if you are doing them better, I just can't get behind evil Ruby or super powerful Ruby. They're just too far outside what makes the character enjoyable.

I have spent the past few hour reading to find out that the final chapter isn't here! If I knew that the last chapter was being re-done then I would have been working on my college homework that needs to be done tomorrow! Even though I'm angry, I still live the story, so keep up the great work.

Dude you don't need to change the final chapter cause of some haters. It's your story, you made great story don't change it. Be proud of your work even if others hate it

I liked the ending...but I look forward to the revisited version and hope it doesn't effect crusade too now I wait.

AWWW I LOVED THAT ENDING D:

Awww man, I enjoyed that ending. I thought it was a proper send off to the story and people hated you for it? That sucks. :(

will this rewrite of the finale affect the sequel

Well that was something! Top marks, sir, and definitely one of my favorites in the RWBY category! So yep, bravo and all that jazz :)

Overall, the Grimm issues were explained and done away with, and the OOCness of certain characters have been largely mitigated. Nice work and great story!

On to the sequel!

-TPS