|Reviews for The Red Queen|
| Rook-385 chapter 25 . 4/17/2019
I just binged this whole fic! It was amazingly well written thanks for writing this and I cannot wait to read the sequel tomorrow morning!
| Guest chapter 25 . 4/11/2019
This would have been better if Yang and Jaune betrayed Ruby as well.
An amazing story became sub-par because of that one fact.
| Nihai chapter 1 . 1/23/2019
Well, I liked the idea but... execution isnt perfect. I mean some characters are acting too OOC(out of character). Hogging attention? really? Bu I like the story overall though
| Brabbit Lohan chapter 2 . 1/18/2019
Ugh, Yang didn't even question passing out from a drink? Never seen any Grim near them before waking up in "hospital"? Ugh the disbelief is real, its like character brains have been sliced and diced into 100 parts and 99 of them taken away, to make these character thoughts actually possible. much sad, very sad
| Brabbit Lohan chapter 1 . 1/18/2019
Lets ignore the blatantly ODD personalities that make no sense and some of the characters that would never act like that.
It's clear they all know Ruby is strong, so why would they ... nvm i can't even be asked to finish this comment, every1 knows what i mean anyway.
Besides the plot and character actions that make almost 0 sense, I like the premise, something fresh.
| Ethos The ET chapter 21 . 12/10/2018
| Ethos The ET chapter 4 . 12/9/2018
This is SO amazing! Heartbreaking but amazing! also THATS what "Dinah" means!? that's some beautiful ironic artwork right there.
| Ethos The ET chapter 1 . 12/8/2018
this is heartbreaking and makes me very sick to my stomach… I say you did a really good job!
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/10/2018
How is this a rated T story
| FL1G chapter 25 . 8/10/2018
I really thought that she would kill Phyrah first sadly she didnt but... im looking forward to see more carnage cause by our little Ruby xD
| FL1G chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
When i saw this fanfic for the first time i was like oh dear this will be good. 1 chapter later... Omg why am i crying
| Homerthe27 chapter 25 . 6/30/2018
This story has been a ride. Rubyʻs fall from grace and seeing how different her teammates are from the original show is indeed an interesting take on the story. Also, I like how the Grimm was presented at the beginning of the story, with them hating humans for killing them. My only concern with the story is that Rubyʻs decision at the end is a little out of character (As out of character a demented version of a character created for a fanfiction could be) and her lines come off a little cheesy. Also, your writing for the Grimm just kinda disappeared after a while which was a shame because I really enjoyed that. However, I did like your attempt at world building with the s classes and I really appreciate that you made sure that Rubyʻs favorite food was strawberry. An overall good story, I hope in the next story we see what happens to Rubyʻs "friends" and how Oz deals with them and how they deal with eachother
| Sullivan chapter 25 . 6/29/2018
This book was amazing and I love it so much, I haven't checked to see if you have yet but could you make a second book to the series
| RedArgos chapter 25 . 6/18/2018
all hail queen ruby mistress of grimm XD
| RedArgos chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
damn, that dialogue was just, hearth warming and I also agree that we should spread Monty joy and enlighten others to his passion for his latest creation, rwby.