this is heartbreaking and makes me very sick to my stomach… I say you did a really good job!

How is this a rated T story

I really thought that she would kill Phyrah first sadly she didnt but... im looking forward to see more carnage cause by our little Ruby xD

When i saw this fanfic for the first time i was like oh dear this will be good. 1 chapter later... Omg why am i crying

This story has been a ride. Rubyʻs fall from grace and seeing how different her teammates are from the original show is indeed an interesting take on the story. Also, I like how the Grimm was presented at the beginning of the story, with them hating humans for killing them. My only concern with the story is that Rubyʻs decision at the end is a little out of character (As out of character a demented version of a character created for a fanfiction could be) and her lines come off a little cheesy. Also, your writing for the Grimm just kinda disappeared after a while which was a shame because I really enjoyed that. However, I did like your attempt at world building with the s classes and I really appreciate that you made sure that Rubyʻs favorite food was strawberry. An overall good story, I hope in the next story we see what happens to Rubyʻs "friends" and how Oz deals with them and how they deal with eachother

This book was amazing and I love it so much, I haven't checked to see if you have yet but could you make a second book to the series

all hail queen ruby mistress of grimm XD

damn, that dialogue was just, hearth warming and I also agree that we should spread Monty joy and enlighten others to his passion for his latest creation, rwby.

I must say i am truly amazed by this story. I know very little about Rwby as it is, but even with that i enjoyed reading this. The viewing pleasure of seeing a sweet innocent girl as Ruby turned into a murderer, betrayed by those she called friends, twisted into madness and revenge. Poor Yang, it seems that her baby sister Ruby did indeed die in that forest, and from her corpse, The Red Queen rose. Oh what a story this was. Truly amazing job.
Maybe i should give the series a shot after all.

Masterfully done. Starting the sequel now

To the review below.
At Least she still has a moral compass.

Ugh! Cheap drama played on morality, this is as far as I am willing to go. You couldn't even make a truly dark Ruby, pathetic.

awesome story

If only Ruby know of the Grimm Dragon under(or near) mountain Glenn

Oh I am happy we get some more differing views of the Grimm here. I like it!