Reviews for The Red Queen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this story dude. As usual, you don't fail to deliver! Keep it up! P.S: Does the book "The Red Tent" have anything to do with the title? |
![]() ![]() How often do you think you'll update this story and the other story The Grimms Rose? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story, and this chapter especially. I expect feels, my friend. FEELS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is quite the amazing story I absolutely love it Also For your question Is it because the name means avenged? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is ruby ever going to back to beacon and if she does would everyone but the ten that betrayed her help her for example yang, jaune, nora and ren |
![]() ![]() ![]() And things are starting to pick up! Wonder how long it will be until she will '' Bring this hell crashing on those who truly deserve it '' *evil smile * |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw yeah! Can't wait to see how Ruby will ''bloom'' as the Beowulf said/though? (I can't help but see how much i'm using '' Can't wait'' hehe it's becoming like a trademark ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting! I love the plot can't wait to read on and see how it goes! See ya |
![]() ![]() ![]() Obviusly either alice is wonderland, or through the looking glass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay now, this was a good chapter. Good to see how much Dinah cares for Ruby, not sure what the conection to the name is but I think that it could MAYBE be the name of the Grandmother in Red Riding Hood. I know I'm wrong. Also, why didn't the Ursa's see the darkness in Ruby? |
![]() ![]() Only gramer mistake that I could see is that you called a fruit a fauna instead of flora |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am very glad you chosen to continue this story :) |
![]() ![]() let me guess...alice in wonder land? Or through the looking glass? |
![]() ![]() ![]() If I remember correctly Dinah is Alice's cat from Alice in wonderland and was especially good at hunting and killing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing. So is Alice and the Red Queen is the same person in this story? As for Dinah that is one big cat? For a companion. So will it be RoseArc? Also I mean I don't much for the others but can you at least make Yang and Penny join in Ruby's cause? |