Reviews for The Red Queen
Dwalkern64 chapter 2 . 7/6/2014
Not much mention bout Jaune and Yang Wanna hear more about Yang's personal feelings. :) GREAT STORY NONETHELESS, KEEP IT UPPPP
ScytheReaper chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
To me, you are the top supporter of RoseArc;
I never thought you would even CONSIDER killing her off. But the writing was good. So great job.
Keep Writing
P.S. people like dark and violent stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
I'm really on bored with this story. If I had to name one bad thing it would be that the stage of Ruby being bullied was to short. I think it would have been interesting to see how Ruby deals with being bullied and the bullying getting worse. Other than that great story please update.
Bloo chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
This is kind of like xeroartsu version of Ruby in king jaune au on tumblr
Jacob Rickshaw chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
I've never been completely speechless reading a story, but I guess there's a first time for everything. I am very, very impressed with this. Good job, Dravyn. I'll keep an eye on this one, you can bet on that.
damian-lucius-black chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
This is actually incredibly good, reminds me a bit of Blood Rose, one of the highest rated rwby stories. I think I'd you continue this it could be just as good if not better.
Noob6 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
gotta say, this is a bit...cruel...for one thing i can imagine team CRDl doing this(being douchebags as they are) but i cant see pyrrah or blake doing this, maybe weiss but even she isnt that cold, i mean how long were they planning to kill her? jealousy is one thing but sheesh!
rwbybomb21 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
well, this different, to say the least, but a good different. there are too many cliché stories out there, with happy endings and plot twists and such, and this is a welcomed refresher, my friend.
Christopherweeblingjr chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
MORE, just to be sure.
I got what I want, so naturally, I want MORE.
What I pay for, entertain me now. All I want is MORE.
Cause I like it! Too good to let it go, keep it coming cause I want MORE.
Cause I'm not sure. What I really want, it's a fise to say I want MORE!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Willofol chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
This was actually painful to read.

Bravo, I guess.
Lord Revan Flame chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
So I wrote a story like this
Not at all as amazing as this
I salute you sir
I salute you
And I want .ore chapters
Simple as that
Just more chapters
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
How is this rated K? Usually stories like these would be T or M, unless you want to take away everybody's childhood innocence away (you cruel person).
Other than that, it is really brilliant thinking how you're using betrayal as a way of turning Ruby dark. Keep Going on this. I want to see more.
UNknown123 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Soooooo are you going to continue this story, because I would be totally on bored with that.
Mr.Green37 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Don't stop. My curiosity has peaked. I want to see what happens next.
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