| Reviews for The Red Queen |
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   Dwalkern64 chapter 2 . 7/6/2014 Not much mention bout Jaune and Yang Wanna hear more about Yang's personal feelings. :) GREAT STORY NONETHELESS, KEEP IT UPPPP |
| ScytheReaper chapter 1 . 7/6/2014 To me, you are the top supporter of RoseArc; I never thought you would even CONSIDER killing her off. But the writing was good. So great job. Keep Writing P.S. people like dark and violent stories. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 I'm really on bored with this story. If I had to name one bad thing it would be that the stage of Ruby being bullied was to short. I think it would have been interesting to see how Ruby deals with being bullied and the bullying getting worse. Other than that great story please update. |
| Bloo chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 This is kind of like xeroartsu version of Ruby in king jaune au on tumblr |
| Jacob Rickshaw chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 I've never been completely speechless reading a story, but I guess there's a first time for everything. I am very, very impressed with this. Good job, Dravyn. I'll keep an eye on this one, you can bet on that. |
| damian-lucius-black chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 This is actually incredibly good, reminds me a bit of Blood Rose, one of the highest rated rwby stories. I think I'd you continue this it could be just as good if not better. |
| Noob6 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 gotta say, this is a bit...cruel...for one thing i can imagine team CRDl doing this(being douchebags as they are) but i cant see pyrrah or blake doing this, maybe weiss but even she isnt that cold, i mean how long were they planning to kill her? jealousy is one thing but sheesh! |
| rwbybomb21 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 well, this different, to say the least, but a good different. there are too many cliché stories out there, with happy endings and plot twists and such, and this is a welcomed refresher, my friend. |
| Christopherweeblingjr chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 MORE, just to be sure. I got what I want, so naturally, I want MORE. What I pay for, entertain me now. All I want is MORE. Cause I like it! Too good to let it go, keep it coming cause I want MORE. Cause I'm not sure. What I really want, it's a fise to say I want MORE! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 More |
| Willofol chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 This was actually painful to read. Bravo, I guess. |
| Lord Revan Flame chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 Okay So I wrote a story like this Not at all as amazing as this I salute you sir I salute you And I want .ore chapters Simple as that Just more chapters Please |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 How is this rated K? Usually stories like these would be T or M, unless you want to take away everybody's childhood innocence away (you cruel person). Other than that, it is really brilliant thinking how you're using betrayal as a way of turning Ruby dark. Keep Going on this. I want to see more. |
| UNknown123 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 Soooooo are you going to continue this story, because I would be totally on bored with that. |
| Mr.Green37 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 Don't stop. My curiosity has peaked. I want to see what happens next. |