Reviews for The Red Queen
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
How is this rated K? Usually stories like these would be T or M, unless you want to take away everybody's childhood innocence away (you cruel person).
Other than that, it is really brilliant thinking how you're using betrayal as a way of turning Ruby dark. Keep Going on this. I want to see more.
UNknown123 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Soooooo are you going to continue this story, because I would be totally on bored with that.
Mr.Green37 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Don't stop. My curiosity has peaked. I want to see what happens next.
RedFluff chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
You sir are a great writer. I love Ruby stories and I can easily say that you are my favorite author. Every time I see you update or make another story I just feel happy inside.

Anyways about this story. This starting was sort of dark and gory(duh someone dies). Maybe include some feelings from the rest of team RWBY and JNPR? Or maybe Ozpin can act suspicious because duh it's Ozpin.

Now speculation time!
I think Ruby will turn into a Beowulf and command the other grim to attack Beacon or the title the Red Queen.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
A very good read so far keep up the good work!
Luke Shadowrider chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
I think that it was...kinda creepy but with the description I know more of what will come so write on drayvn
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