Reviews for Varsity Jacket
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2016
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
ForeshadowedFate chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
This oneshot was rather good, I thought. Not just because of the Eren/Armin moments, but because of the many references and nods to the series I noticed you threw in as well. Eren a part of the school's football team with a goal to defeat the rival Titans, Levi still in a position of leadership and the team's coach, Eren's determination getting in the way of him and Armin, etc. For not even 7,500 words long, you had a lot going on in this fic. A flashback to Eren and Armin's first years as friends, Eren trying to get some time in with Armin before Mikasa gets home, Eren leaving Armin back in the locker room to go out with his friends on the team, Armin getting upset with Eren at halftime during the big game against the Titans, Eren finally saying what he's wanted to say about Armin for a long time out loud to everyone, and the makeup sex between the two of them at the end. XD Seriously, I was honestly surprised at how much you were able to cram into this oneshot!

Personally, I don't mind some PWP here and there, but I tend to like my porn WITH plot if it's available. The fact that you crafted an actual STORY around Eren and Armin's relationship, even if it was just for a oneshot, is something I think you should be proud of. Pretty much anyone can write PWP, but it takes a lot of work and dedication to write something as detailed and in-depth as you did. As with the past few stories of yours that I've left reviews for, there were the occasional spelling/grammar mistakes here and there that I noticed in this, but that's really it. I loved this oneshot, so please keep up the great work! :)
grinning chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
That was really good!
I never knew that this couple would be so cute together.
I really love Eremin now, but I still WORSHIP Levi x Eren (cause they are the best in my opinion).
Ahhh...all the troubles and worries of high think you really captured the difficulties of juggling a relationship and a club without misunderstands and someone getting emotionally hurt.
But I'm really happy that they worked it out _
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
Don't get upset. It was wonderful I loved and the plot too. Eremin is my otp so I'm happy you did this. I just love it. U hope you can make another one in the future -
xFullmetalSoulx chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Ooh, this was adorable! I loved every second of it!
nana chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
this is good don't worry! All of your eremin stories are definitely my favorite, this one is not exception. Armiiiinnnn this fic make me want to protect him as well aaaah, especially after chapter 59 and the fake eremin preview from Isayama, Armin is so important.
CALIC0 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
kissu kissu for you and this story!