Reviews for Harry Potter and the Metamorph |
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![]() ![]() ![]() why would he reveal himself like that. he did t need Fred or George there they didn't do anything. He could have done the same thing with a golum and a glamour. Also the entire point of not revealing his identity was to remain anonymous after the war so that he could live as he pleased but then he just went and revealed it to these two kind of acquaintances. doesn't make sense. Also Voldemort is a master legilimense and occlumense so Harry just traipsing through his mind for his best kept secrets is impossible. Dumbledore just letting these two do as they please when doing as they please means killing all the death eaters would never happen. Even if he was not evil lien he sometimes is in fanfics. Even the best Dumbledore doesn't condone murder or torture in the case of Pettigrew and Bellatrix. Mary Sue so hard. Which is sad because this is like the only complete story where a Metamorphagus is featured so prominently |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mary Sue? more like Harry Sue many convenient coincidences have occured |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write a sequel to this story. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very interesting book enjoyed it immensely thank you for writing it for my enjoyment |
![]() ![]() ![]() Minor spelling mistakes aside this was a very good story. 0)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story is interesting, although the degree of martial Arts mastery in just a year is silly, and I hate the pet name, despite the reasoning behind it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story |
![]() ![]() This could have been much longer, but I loved this pairing either way. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha nice A/N ;) yes, I also recognized getting 4th degree blackbelt would be impossible, but thought it more humorous than annoying. My old Sensei though would probably put you through your paces though for it ;) haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thoroughly enjoyed that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hedwig is gonna peck him on his head repeatedly! Dumbles needs to nut up and accept that in war you have to kill! |
![]() ![]() ![]() With a Eidetic memory all things are possible. Then again, it's magic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far I m really enjoying this! Anxious to get to the killing of Death Eaters, Voldemort and then dealing with Dumbledork! |