Reviews for What should have been
FyreDrakon chapter 6 . 6/12
quick question here: on namek Dende healed Vegeta with no problem. Why is it a problem now?
stylo1 chapter 36 . 6/3
awesome story, pretty realistic much better then the original. it was way to long for my liking though at least 30%, and to much angst and drama but yeah plot writing characters are awesome
stylo1 chapter 31 . 6/3
so when ppl die you can give them back body parts, so why is gohan having a tail so special? because they are to lazy to give goku his back?
stylo1 chapter 26 . 6/2
what happend between gohan and yamu? uou skipped their fight.
i also fail to understand why the supreme kai didnt just explain goku needed training for an even bigger evil. it wouldnt of made it alright but at least a little better instead they let gohan suffer like that. even if goku was wished back he could have stayed in other world training while every 2 week 1 day at earth, shouldnt of mattered that much
stylo1 chapter 10 . 6/2
seems like videl is suffering from insomnia, hearing voices and all that.
and tellemicus sundance, a lot of ppl knew goku defeated king piccolo, that major guy thr journalist after when he went to find his powerpole etc
Guest chapter 28 . 5/25
Plz stop comparing instant transmission to apparition...its really annoying... other then that this fix has been great!
Keep up the good work!
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 13 . 5/7
Technically, no one outside of their group knows that Goku defeated King Piccolo. Not even the dog king guy, although he definitely did try to meet Goku before he flew off.
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 1 . 5/5
Well, if nothing else, maybe Gohan could use Shenron to wish his arm back into perfect condition again? Unless you plan on him keeping it as is out of 'sentimentality' or punishment. That's been done a billion times over already, ugh.
Derraj chapter 9 . 4/22
You are developing a bad habit of not capitalizing the 's' in Sharpner's name.
SUPER SAIYAMAN chapter 36 . 3/25
i loved this chapter espeshaly the part were older kie brought out his powers and gave him more self cofidence. i liked the end were gohan and vedel finaly story
SUPER SAIYAMAN chapter 35 . 3/24
wow is all i can say for your discriptan and hpw you made old ki bring out the power in a slightly different note i believe we all have untapped potential that is somehow locked away in our bodies and minds. we are no were near advanced enofe or prepared enof to experience it or have full control of it.
SUPER SAIYAMAN chapter 34 . 3/24
excelent chapter as always i will defenetly be downlaoding this fanfict. i hope buu dosnt escape the story keap up the good work.
supersaiyaman chapter 33 . 3/20
i would not want to be the man hoo murdered milians. great chapter i cant wait to read the next fanfict wonderfully written.
Guest chapter 32 . 3/20
instead of the pradectable thing to do you have saiyan warrars come from hell to teach gohan what he needs to know very unexpected in fanfict keap up the good work.
supersaiyaman chapter 30 . 3/19
as usual an exceptional chapter. i wonder how a tail will help matters i mean i am famelure with the ape form but buu is much too strong for that.i wander what shin could be planning.
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