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rck19 chapter 2 . 5/23/2016
Use like 90% less exclamation points...just a thought. Other than that it's great
EngLitLover chapter 5 . 1/4/2016
Like your stories, but not this one. The line I'll die if you leave me, reeks of emotional blackmail.
EngLitLover chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
Nice, Darcy probably meant it when he said he couldn't attend a meeting with a poorly tied tie.
old listener chapter 8 . 11/10/2015
nice chapter April! and i think me also not late in reading this time...but its always nice to read them like that
the chapter was second best thing to me
first will be me getting a new phone!
waiting for more...
Lily Draco chapter 8 . 10/29/2015
Very sweet.
Lily Draco chapter 7 . 6/21/2015
A great chapter. Very emotional and sweet. I look forward to more.
old listener chapter 7 . 6/20/2015
Nicely defined all her ways to comfort least she earned a start for things being shared b/w them. Her part of doing special things got counted!
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 7 . 6/20/2015
Very nice, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!


Father's are the strength of the family,
To bond us and hold us together.

Always there to mediate the household,
A determined mentor we look to lead altogether.

He's the bodyguard that protects us,
And give us comfort from all harm.

He constantly offers compassion,
Always offering up his arm.

To stand behind us endlessly,
Though at times in darkness we tend to fall.

He always their to guide us to the light,
For us to follow from his call.

With years to come, day by day,
We grow from the nest we grew.

In hope to became something great,
For I hope to someday be like you.

A Father's love is never ending,
Always there with a heart of pure gold.

Happy Father's Day!
Guest chapter 7 . 6/20/2015
Hi there!
Look, I will be honest. Even though I thought the idea was really good, I felt that the dialog was a little forced in some parts. It could be just me, I don't know. It's like, it didn't seem real. But the gist of the story was really good, with Will bottling everything up and it takes a lot o Lizzy to make him open up. You can't expect a guy to just change overnight, right? It would take time and many difficult conversations for him to stop trying to solve everything by himself.
Anyway, best wishes!
redstrands chapter 7 . 6/20/2015
I like that she pushed until he was able to let go because of his trust in her. I like that in letting go he got messy and exhausted and was able to sleep. I can't wait to read more.
heavenly1998 chapter 7 . 6/20/2015
Aaawww… I think you truly captures just how broken the death of his parents made Darcy. It was really emotional but really well written. I look forward to subsequent chapters especially if they contain a proposal and or a wedding
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 6 . 6/3/2015
Good, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Belated Mother's Day!

M- is the million things she gave me.
O- means only that she's growing old.
T- is for the tears shed to save me.
H- is for her heart of purest gold.
E- is for her eyes, with love & light shining.
R- means right, and right she'll always be.

Happy Belated Mother's Day!
old listener chapter 6 . 6/2/2015
After a long time...good chapter, it would be nice to see her action in such situation as she gets lesser chances to do special things...*if you got my point*
Lily Draco chapter 6 . 5/31/2015
This is a really great chapter. It is interesting to see Darcy closing up again. I wonder if he realizes he's doing it as sometimes people don't. I'm sure Lizzie can get him to open up and help him through his pain. I look forward to more.
leihej chapter 5 . 4/5/2015
Wuau ! This is my favorite story, and make a wonderful job to became in a modern line. And give us a little more of that sweet love prove. Thanks for that's.
Blessing and inspiration.
Best regards
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