The dialogue is really out of character, i'm out.

ilike uuuuu

This is SO GOOD!

So there were a lot of good, dramatic, character and banter things in this chapter; and a few things that didn't make sense to me. Sometimes, something really small can throw a reader out of following along with the story. In this case Gwen, knowing Peter had been hurt in a major battle and wasn't even able to call her up, asking Peter - who was trying to cook a pie that could get messy in the cooking and the cleaning - to "dress nice" and she'd be over in 5 minutes via a cab? Does she live 5 minutes away by car or had she been in the car for a while? If she lives 5 minutes by car away, why isn't she walking over in under 15 to 20 minutes? Why would someone who had been injured and in their own home have to dress up after cooking and cleaning?

I'm worried that this version of the Avengers is being "handled" quite well by SHIELD, and isn't asking enough questions. That said, you're adding a dramatic dimension of them trying to figure this out, too.

I like how you are drawing the difference between those who are curious, those who make policy and have exceptions, and those who are looking for power/advantage with politics.

So many problems with this novel.
1. The avengers would never go along with the world councel.
2. The huge nerf of spider man

So…. is the whole plot for this novel going to be Peters conflict with the avengers?

He also has superstrength that would have him beat the shit out of Cap, no question.

weaker than normal spidey by quite a bit, a crowbar wouldn't bruise him, he'd have left a big ass dent in the stark suit, and he'd have healed from a bruise overnight

Peter lifted his hand up next to his head, laid his fingers against his temple, and with a chuckle, he gave his teammates one last small, pitiful, but otherwise goofy-looking salute.

"Just be sure...you remember me. Your friendly...n-neighborhood...Spider...Man..."

This is poetry. So beautifuly written. I cried, reading this, as Peter doesn't want anyone to forget him.

About Captain America vs Spider-Man. Spider-Man’s strength, speed, and reflexes are so extremely superior to his that Captain America’s training and experience would be useless. That’s just the reality of combat. Even without his Spider-Sense.

And spider webs are insanely strong. Two layers of a real spider’s webbing can stop a .223 rifle bullet. A pencil thick amount can stop a fully laden Boeing 747. And it’s extremely hard to cut due to its elasticity and it’s resilient against basically any environmental factors. The stuffs insane.

If their actions were about dealing with threats and peoples’ safety, then not only would they not bother someone for merely “potentially” becoming a threat, but they’d consider only people whose actions show threat behavior to even have that potential. Otherwise it’s just an excuse to drag people off.

They’re not acting like SHIELD. They’re acting like Nazis.

I don't like fics like these because they make characters OOC to move the plot ahead. There's no way in hell the Avengers would gang up like that on a hero-especially one they know next to anything about it.

A sequel? A SEQUEL, HURRAY! ADIOS, AMIGOS, IM OFF TO CHECK IT OUT!