|Reviews for My Obligatory Self-Insert|
| Partition chapter 1 . 2/28/2015
Hey, this is interesting. Which is bizarre, because I hate self inserts. Wouldn't call You-Emma a true pacifist though. True pacifists are unable/unwilling to fight regardless of the situation. It seems to be more of an ideal or preferred state of being than something ingrained, but whatever. Is this all there is or do you have more stashed away on Spacebattles or SufficientVelocity or something like apparently 95% of Worm ficcers do? Regardless, I kinda want to see where you think you're going with this. Thanks.
| solitare chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
I love this and I want more! We need more fics where Emma doesn't betray Taylor.
I doubt JesuOtaku could pull off the memetic badassery of Skitter.
| Greatazuredragon chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
While at first I think this is good idea and I really liked it, nearing the ending I remembered that changing Emma like that means no nearly two years bullying, no locker incident and no trigger event... so Skitter would never appear... and the world is pretty much doomed... man talk about the road to hell and good intentions... ;p
Nevertheless interesting idea, good work.
| George Oswald Dannyson chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
I really hope to see more of this
| Zaralann chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
| ack1308 chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
I like this. I like it a lot. Emma being calm and reasonable and not grabbing on to the first excuse to 'be strong' that she can. Also, keeping Taylor as a friend is good.
Taylor not getting powers may be a consequence, but time may tell.
| Burn Note chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
I'm intrigued. You've done a really good job of painting the SI with just a few comments. And it's a perspective I haven't seen before (The wonder of fanfic: Reading things you'd never have read otherwise, and don't really want to. Joking aside, I do consider that a genuine advatage)
I have to admit I'm curious how much of that is based on you, the author, if only to get a grasp on how close to reality it is.
| skywiseskychan chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
Well, this was... something... and teribly fun and interesting too! I hope to read more.
| one.who.reads chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
I like the way you handled shadow stalker. However you do realize that you just completely derailed skitter's trigger.
| alex.rushing.5 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Now all your SI has to do is "fix" Amy, Scion via the most powerful hobo on Earth-bet, and Cauldron. And while walking on eggshells to prevent triggering Taylor, since it's been proven that Taylor with powers suffers. Not that Taylor without powers doesn't suffer much when looking at her father's job, her mother's death, and Emma's canonical betrayal.
| Why881992883840002882818839 chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Oh I enjoyed this. I hope you plan to continue it, I would be verry sad if you didn't write at least a few more chapters after wetting my palate with this tasty morsel of a chapter.
| Query chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Gender Dysphoria is an interesting way for a SI to adjust rapidly to a gender flip.
Though Emma should note that she has essentially replaced(overwritten) an actually person and lost contact with any family or friends in her/his past life. Of course having one of your dreams come true and the shock of a rape attempt might delay the realization of Emma's full situation.
I like it though, always wanted to see an Emma SI fic.
Curious if when shes going to start long term planning.
Lung, Undersiders, Bakuda, Leviathan, Coil, Echidnia, Behemoth, Cauldron, Scion.
A lot of threats are going to be lining up in the future.
Better search for a Cauldron vial.
| steamrick chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
A very amusing beginning.
Is the character really modeled after you, or are you writing an OC in SI style?
| Sou Mynona chapter 1 . 7/10/2014