Reviews for The Negotiation
adipose1913 chapter 2 . 12/21/2015
This is emotional on an enormous level. Please continue, I want to see how this progresses.
Jane010 chapter 2 . 12/1/2015
When you stumble upon a good story. You should continue this story. Super good
Daziy is SoniQ chapter 2 . 11/21/2015
Why did no demigod fight back? Their weapons aren't the only weapons. I mean, Leo could've summoned fire, Frank could've turned into anything, and Piper could've told them to leave and they will!
twilight4ever chapter 2 . 11/13/2015
I love this so so so much! Please update soon!
Penny Lu chapter 2 . 11/6/2015
Keep writing! Please! It might be horrible but I still love it and can't wait until the next addition of this story!
Penny Lu chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
I thought I would love this series being a huge fan of both series but, but, that was horrible! Not your writing of course but the fact the two stories mixed in such a gruesome way. Though you wrote very well.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/26/2015
Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2015
More chapters soon please
creampuffs.exe chapter 2 . 10/22/2015
Beautiful chapter. It was exactly what I hoped it would be. I can't wait to see their reaction to the replay. I absolutely love this story so far.
Matt chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
This is crap, the two series take place in different times.
Jasongreen chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
This story seems good. I just got one question. What were the gods doing? You do realize if their children were in danger by mortals, the God would intervene.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
I know you already got a review from me but I had some ideas that you don't have to use but are there just in case.

You could make it what happened in the last chapter but in Percy's point of view.

You could continue in Annabeth's point of view where in the post game interview it shows what happened in the Hunger Games

Or you could do it in the other 5 of the 7 from the prophecy ( Please not Jason) and say how the voted Percy into a death trap and their reaction. ( You don't have to use those ideas but they're there just in case.)
creampuffs.exe chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
You did so well. I liked it better than the rest(no offense.) Please keep writing. You got talent
grimmgirl1 chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Kill snow aleardy
inactiveacc0unt chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Oh. My. Gods. That was... there are no words in my limited vocabulary to describe that story. It seems as though you've concluded it, although I sincerely wish you would write more. It was beyond amazing, and the /FEELS/ were heartwrenching. This one chapter nearly made me cry. I congratulate you on writing something as horrifying as Rue's death, if not worse. I loved how you wrote the one chapter entirely from Annabeth's point of view, leaving room for the reader to imagine what Percy had gone through in the Hunger Games. And the last word, "good"... Ahhhhhhhh such a powerful ending and Percy and the two girls and and and okay I have to stop now before I go into full fangirl mode. But thank you for that incredibly written, terrible story. I absolutely loved it even though it tore my heart out and crushed it. (Oh and by the way thanks for your review on H H; it made my day :))