When you said 'Karasuno responds with fury' does that mean that even the girl's volleyball club is involved? Because some of the girls were there.

Despite he saying 'revenge is a fool's path' I want to see it happen, somehow. And the nameless guy's random act of violence's consequences. I want to see it all happen.

And I don't really know if I want to know the nameless motherf***er's name. I might hunt the guy down in my RL or punch a random guy's face when I see someone with the same name.

Your story's pretty sweet. Especially that Hinata-sibling-relationship. Really hoped that my sibling would turn out like that when I was small. Spoiled my brother and all that. Now he's freaking annoying (all brothers probably are). Eh, but I think mine has redeeming qualities, like his protectiveness as unduly as Noya's and Tanaka'a on Shimizu and also as effective.

Next chapter please. So Hinata can recover.

OH MY GOD IM ACTAULLY CRYING POOR HINATAAAAAA WHY WHY WHY DID THIS HAPPEN UUGGHHH I LOVE THIS FANFIC TOO MUCH I LOVE YOU

Hope that punk got whar he deservef

OMGGGG Karusunoooo you are justtt so sweettttt! Caring for Hinata like that! I love the Natsu and Kageyama interactions! I hope we can get more Natsu interaction with the rest of the team in the future!

Very well written, and seems realistic (I wouldn't know from experience).

I loved Kageyama's breakdown in this chapter: I can easily picture him reacting this way and it was well written. I eagerly await the next chapter :)

Oh thank goodness,.not a deathfic

Ohhhh! this is really great so far! update soon please!

I still can't get o

DON'T DO THAT.
If someone has a concussion like that or any sort of grave head injury, stem the bleeding until a stretcher can be provided or you might end up causing more harm than good. Hinata walking could have potentially been his death sentence. I'm sorry but you scared me a lot with him. And the fact that he doesn't seem to be able to retain information just gives me a bad feeling.
He's not going to die is he?
Please tell me you're not killing him? QwQ
I feel sorry for Kageyama, he must feel so out of his depth. And the last thought and things he said, they were heartwrenching. Poor guys at Karasuno.
Please let this have a happy ending.
And I have to say that the OOC is nonexistant now. Awesome!
Great job, will be waiting for an update! Don't leave us hanging!

I must sound like a sadis but,
I'm loving it! You've created a lot of tension with that single action. Though I think they're a bit OOC. Not much though,
i'll keep reading

I love being Kageyama acting so adorably worried. There's a nice sense of urgency towards the end as well, concerning Hinata's concussion.

Oh my god is it wrong of me to want to tear apart that dude's body? Because I would if you let me And Kageyama and Hinata's relationship is so cute! :)

Oh my goodness, I am hooked on this story. It physically hurt me to read about Hinata being hurt like that! Your characterizations are great. I can't wait for more! I need Hinata to be okay. TT

I really liked that your story was a bit more from Kageyama's POV, because his thoughts and comments on the situation made it more interesting in my opinion, especially since his confused emotions were particularly clear. The way you described everyone else's emotions, even through Kageyama's eyes, was incredible.

The fact that Hinata's first thought was that he had gotten hit in a match was incredibly amusing.

There was only one phrase that seemed a bit strange to me: 'completed their aborted movement'. I think 'previously aborted' or something to that effect may sound a bit better, but that's just my opinion.

Otherwise, it was great! I can't wait to see where you go with the story from here.