Kageyama is such an awkward boy. It's quite endearing.

I am screaming. Their conversation felt very... natural... organic even... and I am screaming.

I hate it. I absolutely hate it.

This constant repetition of Hinata's head hitting the wall despite Kageyama trying to get it out of his mind... This vicious cycle he finds himself subjected to. I hate it.

I fucking hate it.

Only because it happens to me too. And I hate reading about it. But I'm crying cause it's very well written and this story makes me emotional.

I just finished reading a story about Hinata being abused by his father and now...-now I'm here...hm yes... here comes the fucking tears.

Im doneeeee this is so good!

They should always sleep together . . .

What I love about your fic—something that I feel was lost in the anime, and I have never seen the manga—is that you portray them as they are, kids. Whenever I watch the anime or see fan art, I constantly forget that these are kids 14-18 years old and while I’m only a couple years older, it’s hard for me to see them as anything but my age range—despite the constant reminder that they’re in high school I always forget. And your portrayal of them is phenomenal and I really enjoy this story!

I think the first few chapters i just kept bawling my eyes out! Like seriously! How could anyone want to hurt our ray of sunshine?! It’s like villain AU of izukuit’s intriguing as well as devastating or more like feeling your heart getting ripped into teeny tiny shreds o.o i love this story. You have a wonderful way with words and i never got the feeling that anything was out of character! Even the depth you added to kenma und kuroo was much appreciated

Should i call the police, i just witnessed a murder. It was brutal! Murdered by words, of course it would be Tsukishima who did it. I loved it!

I’m not great at communicating about what I think—sadly this hinders my writing, but I want to say something, anything about this book.

There’s...a lot of thoughts put into this book. You made it personal, you put emotions that I and your readers can experience, the amount of body language so detailed the characters feel alive, with the right pacing it’s...wow. Just wow, I’m speechless, wow. I cried multiple times during the event of first few days; Karasuno’s rage when it happened, Kageyama’s wound—I can feel he’s lost and helpless and plead everything would go back to normal—“Hinata’s head hit the wall” is such a strong sentence I’ll remember, such a scary imagery. How Tanaka was affected as badly, Kageyama’s talk with their parents. It has such exciting moments too, I caught myself smiling widely when Kuroo and Kenma decided to come and the sudden appearance of Bokuto, and can we talk more about Tsukki’s philosophy scene? Also Daichi speech with Isao. Holy crap that was beautiful. It was all beautiful writing. How the hell do you write these characters? I just get sucked in after a few paragraphs into the first chapter.

I’m unsure how to describe it, but your writing of this book has a style and I like it. It has great structure too, I think. Again, must be the pacing done right. It just flows naturally. Not sure if this is a good thing but when the fluff scene come, sometimes it still feels heavy knowing what situation they’re in. Yeah, I often feel heaviness when reading this book. At the same time, I’m glad to see the characters catching a break, even momentarily. You also wrote the ‘suddenly scene’ successfully, it was a surprise when it was supposed to be a surprise. As someone who just started writing, your book will be something I’ll take reference on.

The ending. It warms my heart. Ending is a hard thing to pull off for many writers, and this ending is just warm fluff and happiness. Aone and Futakuchi is a good addition. I like seeing the effect of the events, adding into the realness of it all.

Apologize that this review has no structure whatsoever, but I hope I could get my feelings across. Thank you so much for starting and finishing writing this. I wish the best of your future writing career!

Two chapters in and I'm not breathing... Dude. You're killing me with how my heart seemed so heavy reading this at 1 in the afternoon and raining...

UGH WHY IS YOUR WRITING SO INCREDIBLY WONDERFUL

I really loved this. I also liked Daichi's participation, though I would've liked a bit more.

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful fic!
It's well-written with a good balance of drama (tension) and fluffiness. I appreciate the depth of thoughts of the characters after what happened and it made me think of aspects of the characters I never thought before.
I really love how you built their relationships throughout the story and it felt like I've been through a journey with them.
Will check out your other fics too!

Wow.. I really love how protective they all are over Hinata but the way Tsukki handled that was really amazing and I can totally imagine his intimidating aura as he speaks.