Interesting beginning :) I absolutely loved the team's reaction to Hinata's injury. Just one thing that I noticed: what happened to the girl Hinata was talking to earlier? Because I think she sorta disappeared after Hinata got hurt (though I could have missed something...I have a nasty habit of skimming through some sentences in order to get to the plot quicker ). Looking forward to seeing how the story plays out

Holy shit what an asshole.

This was a great story, not only the idea but the way you portrayed the characters' feelings. It made even me fucking angry. I would've loved to beat the crap out of that punk.

(Sorry about my language by the way, lol.) The story was very well written, doll.

That was kind of horrible. How can you do that to our cute Hinata ? Well at least you made us right into the mood. Thats something nice.