Hi jenny, it's me again. I still can't view all the story ( family forever) on my phone, I think it's too Large for small phones to view. so, I want to suggest that u should please cut it into chapters so that us using a small phone can read it and give u those reviews that u crave. please try doing that when u have the time, u must be a very busy person, please please please

Hi jenny it's me again, I still can view the whole story ( family forever ) it's too large for a smart phone, that's why I want to suggest that u should please try cutting it into chapters like the first one so that us using small phones can read it and u can also get those reviews that u crave. please please please ( my lips are quivering ) pleeeassssse

I love this series. A follow up story to prt 2 of the Dalton story would be great.

Hi Joy. The story is complete, but I hadn't clicked the 'complete' toggle when I posted the story. I've fixed that now so it's registered as a finished story now. Thanks for letting me know. :-)

Hi Jenny! You'd probably be wondering why u got no reviews by now for your new story ( family forever ) The thing is, it isn't complete and there's no way anyone can review, that's y am reviewing here to let u know. it's a good one by the ways, I was really enjoying it till I got to where it stopped and it's a total bummer. I hope u get this soon and complete it

Great story love it

THis was such a sweet story ! As amazing as all of your others. Thanks for sharing !