|Reviews for Traitor|
| CaptainODST15 chapter 5 . 12/16/2014
I thougt they would kill Discord I guest wrong.
| lily anson chapter 5 . 11/26/2014
I have to admit to being a fan of MLP version 1 from way back when so I never got into the remakes. I'm also a huge fan of Q though. Eventually when scanning through fanfics it was inevitable that I'd eventually read a Discord / MLP story. I am eternally grateful that the first Discord fanfics I came across were yours. If they hadn't been so well written I might not search any more out. Thank you for sharing your stories!
| Alara Rogers chapter 5 . 11/23/2014
I really wish people would look at a dictionary before declaring something to be a typo. Wan means pale, weak, washed-out. Look it up.
| Foxytheshe-nerd chapter 5 . 11/23/2014
Wan? WTF is a "wan smile"? Typo.
| BeautifulChaos2 chapter 5 . 10/21/2014
AAAAWWWWWWWW! Nice ending. Not my favorite, but still, I like it. I'm not too crazy about CelestiaxDiscord stuff.
| Animekitty47 chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
Such a sweet and touching and awesome chapter!
Yay for working in the bit about the Crystal Heart. :D
I see you cut off the episode play by play off before the giving-flowers-to-Celestia bit. Didn't feel like weighing in on the fanon debate on whether or not she promptly ate them? I get the feeling you'd say no. XD That scene breaks your 'What will Celestia's punishment for Discord be?' flow, so no surprise you left it out.
Will there be a sequel for the whole Discord-in-Ponyville idea?
| Tony lol chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
Ahhhh! This story is SOOOO epic! :3 :3 I loved it! :D :D
| Tony lol chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
:0 y u do this, discoard :3
| Deritine chapter 5 . 7/19/2014
So freaking adorable. Headcanon accepted. I have a giant dopey grin right now lol.
| atomicpuffin chapter 5 . 7/18/2014
awwwwwwww... wow i love this story such a good back story to the episode!
| Deritine chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
Hahahaha- peanut butter. Yes, powerful magic indeed.
| Animekitty47 chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
For some reason I found your explanation of their admittedly terrible Rainbow Power designs hilarious. XD And sweet.
Awesome story. Have I mentioned I love how you close plotholes? That the Tree gave them access to pure Harmony, or Discord's bet Or even stuff like Tirek and Discord's argument about killing. All so well thought out. Which is why I have a completely random question. Where does the Crystal Heart fit into all this Order/Harmony/Chaos, magic, and talents...stuff? :D
| Animekitty47 chapter 3 . 7/15/2014
The first two chapters were awesome and plot-holing closing, but this one is the best!
So far. ;)
| Shadowed-Roses chapter 4 . 7/14/2014
| atomicpuffin chapter 4 . 7/14/2014
awww soo good