Reviews for Traitor |
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![]() ![]() I thougt they would kill Discord I guest wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit to being a fan of MLP version 1 from way back when so I never got into the remakes. I'm also a huge fan of Q though. Eventually when scanning through fanfics it was inevitable that I'd eventually read a Discord / MLP story. I am eternally grateful that the first Discord fanfics I came across were yours. If they hadn't been so well written I might not search any more out. Thank you for sharing your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wish people would look at a dictionary before declaring something to be a typo. Wan means pale, weak, washed-out. Look it up. |
![]() ![]() Wan? WTF is a "wan smile"? Typo. |
![]() ![]() AAAAWWWWWWWW! Nice ending. Not my favorite, but still, I like it. I'm not too crazy about CelestiaxDiscord stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sweet and touching and awesome chapter! Yay for working in the bit about the Crystal Heart. :D I see you cut off the episode play by play off before the giving-flowers-to-Celestia bit. Didn't feel like weighing in on the fanon debate on whether or not she promptly ate them? I get the feeling you'd say no. XD That scene breaks your 'What will Celestia's punishment for Discord be?' flow, so no surprise you left it out. Will there be a sequel for the whole Discord-in-Ponyville idea? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhh! This story is SOOOO epic! :3 :3 I loved it! :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() :0 y u do this, discoard :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() So freaking adorable. Headcanon accepted. I have a giant dopey grin right now lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwwwwww... wow i love this story such a good back story to the episode! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahaha- peanut butter. Yes, powerful magic indeed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason I found your explanation of their admittedly terrible Rainbow Power designs hilarious. XD And sweet. Awesome story. Have I mentioned I love how you close plotholes? That the Tree gave them access to pure Harmony, or Discord's bet Or even stuff like Tirek and Discord's argument about killing. All so well thought out. Which is why I have a completely random question. Where does the Crystal Heart fit into all this Order/Harmony/Chaos, magic, and talents...stuff? :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first two chapters were awesome and plot-holing closing, but this one is the best! So far. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww soo good |