|Reviews for Forgive Me|
| Mellory chapter 6 . 1/28/2016
This is so meeeeeean! But now, I'm sure, the game is on! :3
| Mellory chapter 5 . 1/28/2016
I am laughing so hard right now. From now on I'll be having a hard time not to reply "bring milk" when my boyfriend says "love you". XD
Love this story so far!
| ncbexie25 chapter 12 . 4/28/2015
Absolutely loved this
| NephilimEQ chapter 9 . 2/18/2015
This is *exactly* how I see Sherlock eventually confessing his love for John! With emotional facts, listed off one by one. So Sherlock, but still so heartbreakingly romantic! :)
| NephilimEQ chapter 3 . 2/17/2015
“Just maybe, in those seconds, everything he’d believed in for the last two years turned out to be a lie. Maybe he realized that he needn’t have ever met Mary, needn’t have prepared to propose. And maybe the horror of the situation he found himself in… caused him to lash out?”
The most perfect description *EVER* of what John most likely felt when he saw Sherlock back from the grave. I mean, SERIOUSLY! This line needs to be put all over the Johnlock tumblr and pinterest and all of the other Johnlock sites! It's an explosion of logic, as though someone *coughMarkGatisscough* planned it that way. Great job! :)
| Hatake Tsughi chapter 12 . 11/29/2014
Great job I really enjoyed your story!
| TheCauldron chapter 12 . 10/9/2014
Gorgeous piece of work. Well done! Also that line about arming Mrs Hudson... I could just picture it. Her in her apron and bright yellow washing up gloves, confidently wielding a shotgun. "I said, you cant go up there!"
| a-whisper-in-time chapter 12 . 10/8/2014
I loved this! My heart is smiling ]
| leetah evee chapter 12 . 9/25/2014
Thank you for finishing it so spectacularly! We love it! it's always nice to see them figure it out 3
| Beccakaye11 chapter 12 . 9/24/2014
Wow! seriously wow. This is one of the most well written fanfics I have ever read! I am so gald I found it! Seriously it's beautiful! Everything about it. So in character and just perfect. It's definitely my favorite. And i can be very picky but this is so perfect! I'm definitely going to share this! Great work! Xx
| TheVenturer chapter 12 . 9/24/2014
John is so worth it. So very worth it.
Focus: this is my long-overdue review, which I'll write as I read (hence the reiteration of how incredibly *worth it* John is ;D. )
First of all, thank you so very very much for the shout-out; you know I love these to no end, that's not going to change!
Sherlock's speech made me want to bawl my eyes out because feelings, or just clap for joy because, again, feelings... IT was beautifully written and very much how Sherlock would think in this universe where he and John are together. I'm still angry about how they mostly skipped over a real true to heart Sherlock 'I'm so sorry please forgive me' type speech (though Gatiss/Moffat truly outdid themselves with the wedding speech... be still my beating heart! [I'm done fanning out [[for now]]])
"I think I can wait another hour for you." The sincerity I can hear him saying it with in my head... great line, love that.
Also enjoy how John is suddenly not as keen to eat his food ;D
Walking down the street with linked arms... such a cute image in my head! (might actually use that in art and actually complete it, probably :P )
All of these sentiment filled speeches from Sherlock... I love it and it fits well; makes me desperately wish they were said in canon :(
"Shut up and kiss me" YES. LOVE. IT.
In most stories I read John focuses on Sherlock's neck and always asks him about being sure (if the plot allows it). I'm not saying you're unorigional or that I don't like it; quite the opposite! We all know from the Baskerville episode John pays a lot of attention to that certainly attractive neck so it's definitely in character. We also know he, being this perfect little man, is honorable and moral and caring; he *will* ask if Sherlock's sure because Sherlock matters. So, in short, I loved how you included that.
I'm not going to comment on every little thing I enjoyed in that bit of smut because really I enjoyed *all* of it. Truly. Hot and romantic and beautiful all at once; well done :)
I did particularly like how you had John tell Sherlock he was there. So painfully sweet... *deep sigh of joy*
Ending it with Lestrade was a wise choice! You always write him well and I love him and John's relationship. John's little bit with Greg was a joy to read; John is just so perfect I want to hug the sh*** out of him, honestly. Just hug him till my arms hurt.
"In some odd, ridiculous way, they completely and utterly fit together, and the love between them, though not in the least bit nauseating or over-the-top, was very obvious and beautiful." - probably my favorite line in the whole chapter. It sums them up perfectly, and I absolutely love it. THAT should be put on a t-shirt ;P
All in all a perfect ending, a wonderful chapter and a joy to read (as usuallllllllll)!
Thanks again for the shout-out, I can't wait to read more from your other stories :D
| Serenityofthematrix chapter 12 . 9/23/2014
Very good story. Thank you for writing this story.
| Serenityofthematrix chapter 11 . 9/23/2014
| Countess Hargreaves chapter 12 . 9/22/2014
That was a wonderful ending. you've done a great job in writing their first time together! I really enjoyed reading your story, thank you so much for sharing it!
| XXSilverDoeXX chapter 12 . 9/21/2014
I loved it! It was slightly sad at parts which I liked, and it was sweet at the same time. Brilliantly written!