Reviews for Revolt
Ms.Yaoilover95 chapter 1 . 8/27/2016
This was such a wonderfully written piece. You put so much effort and soul into this story. The beginning was such a necessary build up and I love the way Eren pushed Levi. The characters were well represented. There a few smuts that I reread but this one definitely deserves multiple reads. Job well done. So very exquisite :D
ShippingTraysh chapter 1 . 2/8/2016
Just wanted to say this one one of the best written stories I have read in awhile, especially with Levi and Eren. Very well done good match on the characters also
Naniwa88 chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
THIS IS PERFECTION.
Liasid chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
nice
Zoegurl49 chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
I feel like I need to have a long talk with the Lord after reading that but oh my god it was so good. Seriously, wow.
Driiana chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
Best fanfic I have ever read. You're incredible 3 3 3
yume76 chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
*here lies the body of a fangirl who has died of nosebleed due to an awesome smut written by this author.*
PInsomn chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
Oh my lanta! What a feverish scene! I didn't realize how badly I needed this in my life up until this moment and my god it was so satisfying to read! Great work!
-P.u
DamonandElena4ever chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
That was so awesome and definitely one of the best smut fics I've ever read
hidansbabe530 chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
That was awesome!
Nuikuri chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
GOD. I fucking love this fic. I do not have words for how amazing it . Amazing.
Syaoran837 chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
This was fucking amazing, perfect in every aspect. I hope you continue to write stories as beautiful as this piece of work.
the.heart.crest chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
i really much liked that dragging, that really long, torturing introduction.
It was detailed, pulled out so many details, thoughts and such, that made time seem like sticky honey.

Levi and his "long" torturous life... all the deaths, all the blood... yet he sealed them off within himself, all the pain that came with death, all the fear and all the anger.
sure, sure... that's something one can read out of the "original" Levi too. so it was authentic. it was realistic. it felt as though it could be true.

and then there was that desire-driven Eren.
Surely, not a person of selfcontrol and restriction. but here depicted in a much more mature way that in the original.
if you let yourself believe into this description, it's fine. I first had little troubles, but later on, considering all the traumata eren had been through... also taking that slightly insane, unruly character into account... it was also believeable.

but later on - sure i knew this would somehow result with a lemon - somehow the icecold man had to fall into the passionately burning boy's grasp.
so how?

and here comes a point that i felt was ... difficult...
sure, considering levi having controlled all his feelings forever... an outburst was to be expected.
but i didn't exppect it like this...

As a person, as a reader and author i feel those carnal-hormonal-outbursts somewhat unfitting.

I'm being honest here... i would rather have levi finally succumb to all the pain and eren taking advantage of the broken person, offering the warmth of a living person, to soothe and calm; rather than having levi giving in to his sexual desires.

though that's my opinion.
what you did, you did truly well. It was a hot lemon, no doubt about that. It wasn't plotless, it was very expressive, deep and thoughtfull, without killing the heat...

I again say this: that excruciatingly long, dragging introduction - about all the glances, the hopes, tries on one hand and the refusal, controll, restraint and violence on the other hand - was so fitting to the setting.
I loved it!

i hope my praise came across XD
I just want to give a talented author such as yourself the chance to improve or reflect on their work. Keep it up!
Regina789 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
This is so good! It's really well-written, and I feel like you've captured Levi really well. You should write the story from Eren's point of view!
celine997 chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Woah! Such a heated story!
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