Reviews for Hero or Monster
B21n07 chapter 1 . 8/8
You have an interesting idea, and your Grammer is on point.
However, everything kinds ends there.
No offense, but your first chapter alone is filled with a lot of plot holes, contradictions, and plot points that feel and are very forced.
You give Naruto his empathic abilities and claim that it allows him to truly understand everyone, and when you truly understand someone "you love them".
Your Naruto originally comes off as enlightening and able to see the truth to world and all that.
However, that quickly changes when his empathic abilities only mean shit for Konoha. That he would love Konoha, yet hate the cloud nin for similar reasons. It's a really forced point in trying to give a reason why Naruto loves Konoha and its residence, despite the extreme emotional and (in this case) physical abuse.
There's more I can say, but no one really gives a shit and I don't feel like typing anymore.
I'm not saying give up, but there is a lot of things that can be improved.
2000karma chapter 27 . 8/4
This fic...I'm speechless.
Wolfy chapter 21 . 7/21
I am a female and I love the story
Multi fandom geekerello chapter 27 . 7/10
Guest chapter 21 . 6/5
Great work
Gust chapter 1 . 5/21
Great other one naruto just kiss there buts all ready I'm sick and tired of naruto being a ass kisser
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21
Great other one they beat me hate me but I love them naruto just bow down and kiss there buts all ready they hate but I love them kiss kiss kiss there buts
Guest chapter 27 . 5/6
Why don't you write further...?
santitolemanya chapter 1 . 3/26
Good story
Sivaatasi chapter 27 . 3/19
I really, really, really want to see the end of this story.
freedomringer chapter 27 . 2/23
Has this been abandoned?
CrimsonKnight24 chapter 27 . 2/1
I really like your story I hope continue
Sly-carrots chapter 1 . 1/20
I only read a few paragraphs and this is epic. It totally reminds me of terror blade from dota with the ability to see people. This is going to be fun.
jack234 chapter 1 . 1/7
Omg update plzzz
Reih D. Lawless chapter 1 . 12/31/2022
Ayo wtf?
I just found Gold!
tnks for the awesome fianfic!
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