Reviews for One Take Only |
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![]() ![]() ![]() After this last post, I had to reread everything. And I'm still loving it! Can't wait to see how the interview goes. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! I am totally a Detective Conan fan, and that would be hilarious! Kyoko could be suspect #1 and Ren could be suspect #2! ... Just kidding! But seriously, I wonder what would happen if the two casts were to meet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy this chapter. The song feels believable (in terms of both lyric format and Sho's character), Kyoko is as persistently dense as ever when it comes to Sho, and Moko is pitch perfect. Kyoko worries excessively about Ren's jealousy, which is pretty true to canon but still unsettling. That's one of the (intriguing?) quirks about Skip Beat: Ren is not noble. Of course, Kyoko is really screwy too. So I still want to see them grow into a happy, healthy ending. ;) Thanks for keeping this story going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the whole story and the places you are taking us readers. I want to give you a prize for how well you handled the whole "learning to kiss" thing. It was very believable and in character which can be really hard to do for an innocent Kyoko. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Kyoko! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! And I bet Ren wasn't quite 'satisfied', lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! It's not Ren it's Sho! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, of course Ren said yes to that, schedule or no schedule! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonder how the interview will go. interesting story. really enjoyed reading what you've written so far. hope you get around to updating again soon. |