Reviews for One Take Only |
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![]() ![]() ![]() chiori cracks me the hell up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome fic! Loved every moment of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, loved it. Just one problem: it's 'senpai' not 'sempai' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you make a sequel? Maybe just a one shot where they are revealed? Like Oh surprise, they go to the Oscar together? Or something totally crazy because it's Skip Beat? I need more! A daily dose of Kyoko and Ren! Recommanded by all doctors! Yup! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gasp! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I like this turn of events! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This! Was so! GOOD! Your fic was one of the suggestions someone left on tumblr, and I do not regret a minute of the couple of hours that it took me to read. I really appreciate the obvious skill you have in writing (refreshing, for fanfiction), and how in-character everyone was! Taking a little bit of Kyoko's obtuseness away was totally believable for the purposes of the fic, and I like how you handled the kissing scenes-descriptive without being gratuitous. Also, unrelated to the fic, it was kind of fun to see Russian and French at the bottom sometimes, because those are two languages that I'm learning, haha. In any case, I'm looking forward to seeing more material from you in the future! It's been a while since I've read Detective Conan, but whenever you finish your crossover, you can be assured of at least one avid reader in this corner (and of any other future stories you publish). Thank you for sharing your talent with us! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() make a sequel... |
![]() ![]() OMG, that was so good! Loved it! And I have to say, I loved not only your ideas, but also the way you wrote. I laughed a lot, got a few good surprises and had a very pleasant time reading this overall. Thank you for sharing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW. This was so well-written. I absolutely adored each of your characterisations. I think my absolutely favorite scene was the Chiori-Kyoko-Kanae sundae date and the Chiori house. I think the friend jealousy is so cute and real. I'm glad you captured that so well. Ahhh Sho. You suck. Your love life sucks. Sorry not sorry! Lulz. Too bad Ren exists! Ahhh but this concept was sooo hot ; Ren teaching Kyoko how to kiss. You did such a good job! Thnk you sooooo much for writing this. I had so much fun reading this, even though I have so much work to do ;_; This was so worth it. It will be worth staying up for. Gonna go check out your profile to see what else you've written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story but felt like there should have been more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was looking for a fun read when I first found this, one I could put down if nessesary but that I would still enjoy. Instead, I found myself a fanfic that I couldn't put down until I had fully read it in one sitting! This was very well written, it really pulled me in and is probably the first fanfic that felt wholly and completely in character that I've read in the Skip Beat archive thus far. I love how you took a deeper look at Sho's personality and emotional conflict, and although you never solved what took place between Kyoko and him somehow it felt fitting for you to leave it open ended. The interactions between Ren and Kyoko had intensity that definitely came across for me as the reader, without feeling overdone and exaggerated. I enjoyed every minute of their scenes! The other characters interactions within the story just added to the overall mood and I absolutely loved every minute of this story! More then happy to be adding this to my favourites list, and I plan to reccomend this story to my friends who like Skip Beat:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() When you read fanfiction so good that you accidentally confuse it with cannon. I was reading the manga the other day and I thought the kissing practice scene actually happened and got very confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was so great. Characters on point, the plot, and your writing style. I seriously enjoyed this work. Thank you so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed the story so much! Your characterization is spot on that I can even imagine it as part of the manga :D It would be nice though if we can see how they announce their relationship to the world, but I'm sure that would be some time later. Thank you for great story! |