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![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for updating so quickly! Really been looking forward to this chapter and it did not disappoint! What next - the actual scene with Sho? More awkward UST with Ren and Kyoko? Can't wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has gotten quite interesting... cant wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() OH MY GAWD! I can't wait for Sho's reaction when Kyoko kisses him... |
![]() ![]() ![]() The fact that they kissed so much that they were puffed out and dehydrated amused me to no end, I was rather sorry to see the end of their 'practise session'! Perhaps after the Box R filming is over, she and Ren can review everything she's learned again to make sure she has really got it ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woot woot french kissing! I'm looking forward to reading about more of THAT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im hum shoked little kyoko wow more I'm so glad for ren though what will sho do next chapter please asap |
![]() ![]() One word. EPIC ! XD plz. write more as fast as possible cause this is really good! Love your reader |
![]() ![]() ![]() YESSS! I have found a gem (i mean this fanfiction that you have written of course.) I cannot wait to read more of what will be coming next! I love the concept of it and, i just love it and cannot wait for more! Thank you for writing this, i have enjoyed reading it, and i am trully looking forward for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, Kyouko, yessss! Ahaha, can't wait for Sho to eat his words at Kyouko's expertise |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! One of the best stories I've read! I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot! I love this. I could not help to think about Sho's expression when he's gonna learn -because I bet he will- that he "offered" Ren an opportunity of a full evening of kissing with Kyouko... |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD I see we share a love for leaving readers at semi-cliifhangers. XD I loved this! Hm... well, obviously Ren will be stunned. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoo hoo! how well will Ren control himself now? *evil laugh* |
![]() ![]() This is it!? This is where you're ending it!? Goodness, this feels like you enjoy our suffering. Ugh, I really don't want to wait for the next chapter. This was just getting extremely good too! Agghh! Frustration! I totally love your writing style though! You're a fabulous writer! Which is why I need more! D: |