been 6 years asswipe. time to get back on the horse as it were

Feels like he has way too much to do at the same time.

Can't he eat souls to gain power? Why isn't that his #1 priority after he almost died?

Just can't find it in me to care about demons or whatever at all.

If he studies nonstop then how tf doesn't he know how to clean himself with magic yet? Pretty sure Hermione could do that during the first year.

10 seconds is a long ass time in a fight.

So basically the bird is the real power who just grabs a pet human every now and then?

Iust reread this story thru and really hope you come back to it someday

ok I figured out Hannah but my guess for other two Neville for war and Blaise for famine

he says that he doesn't want anybody else in his compartment, he let's someone into his compartment, he says he doesn't want any friends until he's found the other three riders, then he does things that would make anybody want to be his friend.
where is the consistency? and he just acts like a douche and nobody seems to even get annoyed at him for it

seems pretty good, nothing that broke my emmersion or made me double take. I like how cannon has been changed in ways that don't just break it like in most fics and how it's not some secret bs where only 10 people in the entire world know about it.
the changes have been inserted quite well, giving enough away to lead the reader in the right direction, but not enough to get the full picture, I especially like that fact that nothing is spoonfed to you and you can come to your own conclusion even if it could be the wrong one.

Oh yeah, bad boy Harry

Great choice given the Ossuary

Hmm, they need support personnel. Susan and Hermione. It appears to be Millie from Slytherin but maybe not. As long as it isn’t Draco

Maybe a coven in support

Good choice since healers must be dispassionate