Reviews for Harry Potter and the Riders of the Apocalypse
Arthur Yeoward chapter 1 . 9/1
This is the best story I’ve read. Love your work,
Please continue it
XXX777 chapter 57 . 7/14
Please update this story.
FoxMaster1020 chapter 1 . 5/17
love the story if u could I have a story challenge I want to do but need help with if u wouldn't mind
Matchubaka chapter 57 . 4/11
This is such an interesting story. I hope that one day you can come back to it and finish it
Hippothestrowl chapter 7 . 4/10
Why? Why did Harry 'do a Dumbledore' and let Snape off the hook to commit more evil? Because Snape is basically bad and will cause more suffering, there's no way you can turn off his evil short of divine inspiration or something. So he'll make life miserable for some at the Ministry and no doubt he'll provide Death Eaters with special potions to help raise the money to pay off his fine. All Harry's fault, same as when he let Pettigrew live in the Shack.

- Hip
Hippothestrowl chapter 6 . 4/10
Serve Snape right. Hope they put him through the veil on a rope and pull him back so they can do it again and again. A lot.

- Hip
Hippothestrowl chapter 4 . 4/10
Hooray! A fic where Harry tells Snape where to get off and walks out on him.

Boo! Pomfrey is almost as bad as Snape! Instead of first TEACHING Harry how to clean a cauldron, she just orders him then corrects him when gets it wrong because hey! nobody taught him! It may be dramatic but it's bullshit inefficient teaching. But then she's got the excuse that she's not a teacher and has not been taught teaching methods. Snape has no excuse.

- Hip
Pyro880 chapter 1 . 3/29
I'm really enjoying the story it's very well written and thought out.
Makaila Horinek chapter 57 . 3/3
This story is really good and has a lot of potential please continue it I would love to see where you take the story next
Aurora chapter 7 . 2/25
I rather liked this chapter- I had been expecting and preparing for some endless bashing (my expectations are low, I know), but was pleasently suprised to see such an interesting and sympathetic take on Dumbledoor's POV. I truly wish now that the old man just peacfully and happily retires and leaves the next gerneration to the next gerneration.

I'd also like to comment on Harry as a whole in this story- the way you've characterized him has been quite good as well, keeping to a plainly understood and well followed principals that align with his current goals- I will simply hope for the character development in the future as the boy gets older, escpecially once the other horsemen get introduced.

Overall- a job well done!
Winged Seer Wolf chapter 37 . 2/21
Since you're using some aspects of Anita Blake in this fic in regards to Necromancy. it's actually three days for a soul to leave according to the information from the Anita Blake series.
TBWL713 chapter 13 . 2/18
Hiding the stone in that manner is entirely too dramatic. It's just unnecessary and there was no reason to do it.
TBWL713 chapter 10 . 2/17
Why have you made the Professors so weak? Conjuration is taught to NEWT students. You said that Dumbledore only learnt it after he defeated Gellert... he was 65 years old when the duel took place when he should have learnt it when he was 16/17. Then you made it seem like Dumbledore and McGonagall couldn't defeat a single mountain troll. Like... wtf? Dumbledore would just blast through its magical resistance, completely obliterating it and McGonagall would simply transfigure something into a large steel sword and banish it through the trolls head. Cannon first-year Harry and Ron knocked one out ffs.
DreamRiders chapter 1 . 1/6
where is book II
thecht chapter 57 . 12/28/2021
Amazing writing for all of it. I enjoyed reading it immensely. Plz update it.
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