|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Riders of the Apocalypse|
| alix33 chapter 47 . 7/30/2017
EW! at that bit about Peter Pettigrew, but I suppose he had to come into your story/fic at some point.
| alix33 chapter 46 . 7/30/2017
AW! At Harry having hugged Millie.
A too jovial Cornelius Fudge a) creeps me out; and b) worries me.
Yay! at Fudge’s reaction to being told by Harry that he (Fudge) has insulted Harry.
“Consider yourself a member of the elite?”, not “Consider an elite?”
| alix33 chapter 45 . 7/30/2017
Yay! for Harry developing his tools with which to manage his finances so very early on in his life.
I liked Harry’s rant at Sirius’ attempt to hug him loads.
| alix33 chapter 44 . 7/30/2017
I’ll bet my yearend bonus that somewhere inside her Hannah isn’t pleased at Plague agreeing with the point/s Harry made.
| alix33 chapter 43 . 7/30/2017
Yay! for Cedric ranting at McMillan, Smith and Finch-Fletchley on Harry’s behalf.
All of Susan’s actions toward Harry made me laugh.
| dreamwalkerlisa chapter 57 . 7/29/2017
Really loving this story! I don't want to rush you but...when's the next update?!
And regarding the Horsemen/women, I am always fascinated with stories that had Harry relating to Death and whatnot. Hannah was quite unexpected but strangely fitting, I can't seem to grasp who War is but I think I might know who is Famine.
Still, amazing plot and ideas! Can't wait to read more~
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/26/2017
I LOVE “Home is where Mr. Potter declares home”.
Yay! for Amelia at least forbidding the Order of the Phoenix from summoning anything remotely like Mephistopheles while they’re based at Grimmauld Place.
“he’s had to have it tuned”, not “he’s had to of had it tuned”.
I like Harry’s having made that meticulous shopping inventory, rather than just a plain or ordinary shopping list.
“pure-blood” should be hyphenated.
Yum! at the idea of Harry getting a staff or a sceptre, since a wand would pretty soon not be powerful enough for him any longer.
I think the fire came from having Nicolas Flamel’s stone inside his body so long and then having it removed.
Take THAT, Gilderoy Lockhart, you imbecile.
| alix33 chapter 42 . 7/27/2017
“sociopathic”, not “sociopatic’.
| alix33 chapter 41 . 7/27/2017
“make me retch”, not “make me wretch”.
| alix33 chapter 40 . 7/27/2017
I LOVE that Lockhart is fearful of Harry.
“In thirty seconds”, not “thirty second”.
Yay! for Harry at least temporarily having convinced Cornelius fudge not to take Hagrid into custody.
Something needs to be done about that odious Lucius Malfoy, honestly.
“Staircase” should be one word.
“A head poked out”, not “A head poke out”.
| alix33 chapter 39 . 7/27/2017
“symptoms of a high powered”, or “synonymous with a high powered”, not “symptoms with a high powered”.
“duty-bound” should be hyphenated.
“goings-on at Hogwarts”, not “on-goings at Hogwarts”.
“innermost” should be one word.
“she is in agony”, not “she is agony”.
I like it loads that Dumbles’ arrogant attitude that made him think he knew best has now been revealed to him as having caused Harry pain.
“You had to have”, not “You had to of”.
| alix33 chapter 38 . 7/27/2017
“passable stretcher”, not “passable stretched”.
“breastbone” should be one word.
As should “waterfall”.
It felt completely wrong that Dumbles got that near Harry.
I feel dreadfully sorry for Hannah's steed that she fears it so much.
| alix33 chapter 37 . 7/27/2017
“blackboard” should be one word.
As should “overlapping”.
“most well known Priestess”, not “most known Priestess”.
“long-lived” should be hyphenated.
“lifespan” should be one word.
“poring over tome”, not “pouring over”.
“proofreading” should be one word.
As should “battlefield”.
“great-grandfather” should be hyphenated.
“wartime” should be one word.
As should “overlapped”.
| alix33 chapter 36 . 7/27/2017
“twenty seven Chimeras”, not “twenty seven Chimera”.
“by Right of Conquest”, not “Rite of conquest”.
Godric Gryffindor’s study is ginormous, if its dimensions are 27 by 29 steps.
“future-proofing” should be hyphenated.
Mrs. Norris’ name needs an extra R.
“mortified by”, not “mortified of”.
| alix33 chapter 35 . 7/27/2017
“making it cling to”, not “clinging it to”.
“backhanding” should be one word.
As should “widespread”.
“I can see your point”, not “I can your point”.
“grab a hold of”, not “grab ahold of”.
“could have just gone down”, not “could have just went down”.