|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Riders of the Apocalypse|
| Delted Account- 9891 chapter 57 . 7/4/2017
oh yes. oh yes oh yes oh yes! I've read this fic probably about 4 times. when I saw the update I had to just sit a smile for a second. Oh thank you! Now its only chapter 2 in book 3 but honestly I can't wait for things to happen. Such as say Sirius? Oh there is so much you can do and the world you've created is beautiful. It drags you in and locks you into the story, full immersion. Don't take too long, but never rush yourself dear. I understand taking a break or a dead muse. you do what you do and we shall all be here waiting for you,
| CreedMaster chapter 57 . 7/4/2017
my fav hp fic is back, I hope u update again soon, I love seeing fudge get thrown on his ass figuratively and physically.
| Fictionlover0629 chapter 57 . 7/4/2017
The chapter is amazing like all the others before it
| TigerCritic chapter 1 . 7/4/2017
Are you trying to throw us off? I have a few guess though I'm wondering when things will pick up a bit. Lots of hinting and small things being done, sure you havevthe relics but lets get to the good part already :p
| TigerCritic chapter 4 . 7/4/2017
ive never seen anyone use Pomfery as potions teacher. nice
| anon444444444 chapter 56 . 7/1/2017
Are you dead?
| Queen of Winter chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
Ignore the 'King of Spring'. His opinions hold no merit or substance when your work is compared to his own. Your way of writing paints the scenes and allows readers to fill in the 'color'.
Your grammar is superb and a refreshing pleasure on this site. The King's work lacks a certain... grammatical nuance. His attempts to discredit and uninspire your creativity is clearly rooted in jealousy. Sad.
Wishing you the best Berserker.
| SafeT2nd chapter 54 . 6/27/2017
When falling from a great height weight becomes irrelevant the spider thingy should not have fallen faster then them since its body mass is so wide it would fall slower. since Harry and Hannah are smaller they have less mass meaning there's basically nothing pushing against them that is why when you skydive you can change your speed since there is less force pushing you when you become aero dynamic I really don't care about this fact and I'm sorry if this seems like a flame I just got bored and nitpicky
| The Hammer of Justice chapter 2 . 6/22/2017
There's very little original content in this fanfic so far, other than Darksiders crossover. You've mostly been using silly little shit like theft from bank accounts (which got boring after the 2nd time, and is still boring the 9 millionth time), politeness to goblins (read above), the calling muggles some term that's more than a mouthful and then, you decide to give HP the OCD equivalent of politeness. None of these things add anything to your story other than yelling at the reader that you like to repeat what others have tried a thousand times(and failed).
Do you read anything you write? Do you honestly think that the Pale Rider gives any fucks about politeness?
The only reason I even bothered with a review is because your grammar is decent.
| Guest chapter 56 . 6/20/2017
Please continue this story
| Rooster chapter 56 . 6/18/2017
Very interesting fic...waiting for next updated
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/7/2017
Looks like you tripled that goal. Also, I got the ashes to ashes and dust to dust joke in ch. 2. Even if you did it subconsciously it is very good.
| raigalcc chapter 53 . 6/3/2017
imagine my surprise that Moony is Cissy's golden boy, literally didn't see that curve ball coming at all lol
| raigalcc chapter 20 . 6/2/2017
omg are you telling corruption is back right under hogwarts?! we really need the riders now
| raigalcc chapter 2 . 6/2/2017
you know compare to the finding other 3 horsemen. Harry can be easily identified no thx to good'ol Dust. it attracts the other riders like a freakin lighthouse lol