Reviews for Harry Potter and the Riders of the Apocalypse
Guest chapter 56 . 5/24/2017
Bro you are an amazing writer
Keep it up
And update soon pls
Sereda Hawke chapter 38 . 5/14/2017
I have to ask, were you thinking of Sovreign from Mass Effect when writing this cause it toooootally reminded me of his,"Primitive creatures of flesh and blood." speech.
Sereda Hawke chapter 35 . 5/14/2017
I think his rant was a tiny bit OOC but then again he's got his emotions largely unblocked so maybe not. Either way my biggest issue is about literally the last sentence. Why would he only slightly smile? Because finding a Necromancer to help him is literally part of his Dream. Is it because he's too cautious to feel optimistic?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2017
The characters especially the children act like a 5 year child and an 80 year old adult simultaneously. There are no realistic personalities in any of the characters. Harry doesn't struggle or work to achieve any of his goals. The universe(author) gives him the things he is looking for with little to no effort. The conflicts(battles) are always solved by deus ex machina and so far he hasn't made a feasible plan to achieve any of his goals that hasn't gone disastrously wrong. Overall the story is below average with little to no suspense due to excessive use of plot devices and unbelievable characters.
The Age of Awesomeness chapter 56 . 5/10/2017
Cliffhanger much!

I found this, I love it! Please update soon! Keep up the great work!
Fallow53 chapter 56 . 5/6/2017
xxx Kudos xxx : )
Dragonfyre1234 chapter 22 . 4/29/2017
Whoa...this totally lived up o the hype...especially that touch of Salazar and godric...honestly I've read many fanfiction for a while know and this story is my favorite along side Do Me a wrong which is a bleach and high school dxd crossover fic... I love the aspects of death used as well as all of the magical theory especially when the major antagonist are beast tying to cross the veil and devour the world...who knows maybe the king may possess good old voldy...I'm really loving the story so far...please keep up the good work - your fan,
TheMisnomer chapter 56 . 4/29/2017
Looking forward to an update. Warframe was great.
Keep at it, you're talented.
DuckedHard chapter 56 . 4/25/2017
Need more.
XNiteWalker chapter 56 . 4/24/2017
I just read this all the way through and it is amazing. I'm pretty sure Neville Longbottom is Famine and I'm going out on a limb here based what you've said on War and the one scene she showed up and I'm going to say that Tracey Davis is probably War.
Guest chapter 56 . 4/19/2017
Ooooooooooooo my God I'm on the last page and the beginning of the next book can't what to read more your grate at writing.
Guest chapter 49 . 4/19/2017
Well the story has gotten no less good since harry has killed molfy
Guest chapter 46 . 4/18/2017
Haha molfys dead cold as ice to
Guest chapter 43 . 4/18/2017
Being given the chance to talk to some one you lost is pretty deep I wouldn't be able to say no
Guest chapter 41 . 4/18/2017
The baskillesk fight scene was not as good as the first. Only because I wanted harry to have it as a pet but it was a good chapter
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