Reviews for A different tale of Ash Ketchum! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, Ash is willingly to sacrifice his needs to help others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see what happens next. Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lopunny got what she wants-and then some |
![]() ![]() Does this mean you’re alternating the chapter listing this fanfic to have more chapters? Pokemon Hunter J is here in Kanto? N you’re having her appear to capture Pikachu’s Kangaskhan family? Talk about another level. U sure Ash right now can handle someone that strong n ruthless to save them? U sure Team Rocket wasn’t the ones who sent him on this legit cruise with no plan in mind? That swapping Pokemon thing has already been done in Sun and Moon, but swapping parties? Sounds interesting n complicated. But it should be fun. So who swaps with who? Pokemon taking after their trainers has always been evident in every episode in all series. It shows how much care u groomed into your Pokemon that they started wanting to act like their friends. I say u got pool romance sex down good. Definitely what u can find in vanilla hentai. One week before the League starts n a few weeks planned to spend time with his females, while needing to win the Earth Badge? What kind of timetable you’re running? I wonder if Ash can fuck all his females in time before the fanfic ends? Would there be more adventures for Ash after finishing Kanto? Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute and fun "date" between ash and lopunny. can't wait next chapters for the gym battle, and hope there won't be pity badge like nerfing battle like the anime or some former gym battle. means ash will fight giovanni and the same official 8 badge level pokemon team all other trainer or robert faced. no plot twist like jessie and james or another rocket grunt replacing giovanni at the last minute (because it well know even powerful pokemon can be useless in the hand of incompetent trainer, the anime proved it with the TR trio) and no ash get a special free pass to the league with only 7 badges. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh that was good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can see why there's this one dude constantly going on about his hatred for Robert. He almost sound like that one girl from the pokemon school. It's vary annoying but I don't think warrants his level of hate. As for there way of speaking towards Ash? Redundant and should have simply boiled down to the simple fact that they had a month head start over Ash who been journeying for what maybe 2 weeks now if that? Of course they have more battle experience they simply have been doing this for more then twice as long. But that month head start will mean less and less as time goes on. As for Robert what Ashs Blazakin thinks about is that his aura that some how passifies pokemon around him is vary unnatural. Gives me N vibes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ash has the Kanto Eeveeolutions and more to go. Ash has one shot in getting his last badge. |
![]() ![]() I believe I said this before, if u want to write Robert’s journeys too in this fanfic, that means u will have to change the chapter list to include more content. So unless u want to keep your list unchanged writing a different fanfic parallel to this is an option. One week?! Before the League starts?! That’s too soon! Which means either Ash fails to win his last badge from Viridian in time or he won’t get any training in before the League! If you’re making the movie canon wise then chronologically wise Giovanni should still have Mewtwo in his possession since he would use it in Gary’s gym battle before Ash’s. Right now Giovanni should still be in charge of the Viridian gym so whatever u got in mind for the story he could either give up to position to Team Rocket trio or Carl when he goes to attend to Mewtwo. Also Mewtwo’s departure from Giovanni was shown in the anime two episodes after the Viridian gym battle which starts the foundation of the movie. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() U sure like writing heavy chapters involving dying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was su h an emotional chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s sad how Anton was abandoned by those who were supposed to take care of him all because he was too sick to pay them. And how his pokemon were left to fend for themselves too young to even understand what happened. Seeing how those responsible will be brought to justice and that Candice and Janette have joined Ash makes it better. Good luck to them and to Ash of getting his last badge! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have been following this story for a while, and let me tell you every time a new chapter comes out makes my day just a little bit better. With every chapter being just as good as the last just makes this whole fic just *Chefs' Kiss* Fucking Immaculate..._ |