Reviews for Desire: Harry and Ginny
Guest chapter 6 . 6/7/2016
Please update haha... waiting already! Awesome so far.
Esther Jacobson chapter 6 . 2/27/2016
I like the story but I'd love to see more chapters to it.
whitecanary1611 chapter 6 . 12/25/2015
timefreak chapter 6 . 8/14/2015
I fear that you might make the plot too predictable.
Please don't just put down the exact Canon plot, but with a soul bond. Change things up, introduce plot twists.

Also, characterization, especially between Harry and Ginny. Ginny is Harrys first love, and being deprived of affection all his life, he'd be severely attached to her, to the point of being almost submissive to her. He's dependent on her, mentally and emotionally.
I don't mean submissive sexually, hope you get my point.

Basically, thank of your characters, what they're like, how you want them to be, how their past affects them- child abuse for example manifests itself on different ways. Flesh them out, give your characters flaws.

Good luck
big wolf559 chapter 6 . 8/11/2015
The story seams good so far carnt wait for another chapter hope u update soon
Blitzstrahl chapter 5 . 8/1/2015 OC's they just clog up the story.
Blitzstrahl chapter 4 . 7/31/2015
Amelia Bones is in charge of the entire DMLE she wouldn't have time to be doing Mafalda Hopkirks job in the underage magic monitors office.
Blitzstrahl chapter 3 . 7/31/2015
Naturally Ron doing his best to get Harry to dismiss Ginny as a annoyance.
Blitzstrahl chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
Well just ignore the fact that at 11 Ron hated Hermione.
scrappy8 chapter 6 . 7/31/2015
great chapter
Lilykees chapter 6 . 7/31/2015
I look forward to the next chapter. Hopefully Ron will grow up quickly.
Comet Moon chapter 6 . 7/31/2015
Yay your back.

Good show.

Look forward to more

Ja ne
stars90 chapter 6 . 7/31/2015
Welcome back! Nice work, it's fun to see how much easier having Ginny by his side makes all those wizarding weird things Harry always had trouble with. Keep it up!
Angieee11 chapter 5 . 2/16/2015
Please update I love the story
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 5 . 12/7/2014
A really well thought-out story...
I so do hope that you'll update soon...
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