|Reviews for Ash's injury|
| percy chapter 1 . 6/2
real bad dumpface not even close to spix primes a new experience fool
| hannah chapter 1 . 4/4
n'awwww so sweet! I love it! rockin'
| Undertario chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Where did Pikachu go? and where is crying Brock? (because 1: he still doesn't have a girlfriend 2: because he missed the moment he has been waiting for for years or not I don't know the ages.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
FINNALY! ash and mysty kiss You Don't Know how long I WAs WATING FOR That thank you i am onered to read youre fanfictions POKEMON RULES BABY
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
| Tropicallight chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
Same ending like other two stories
| Emily chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
your a genius and yes i like it
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
i loved the story you could write more those misty ash stories were ash is getting hurt :3!
| PalutenaX87 chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
towards the end, I think you used the word "happy" too much
| Xtreme Gamer chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
That was cute. That wa like one of those little feel-good stories you read when you need something to help you feel better. All in all a well done story.
| Traitor of All Traitors chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
You used the fourth episode of the first season, didn't you? It seems like that, only without Samurai. It's okay.