Reviews for The Daywalker
SeanHicks4 chapter 12 . 9/28/2011
I didn't expect a mass crossover when I saw the sumary saying Xander meets Blade, but the stroy was cool. Your dialogue reading like a scrpt was a little annoying though.
AnthonyR89 chapter 12 . 10/15/2007
this staory has potential, you should continue it.
AnthonyR89 chapter 2 . 10/15/2007
im going to assume this is one of your older works, by the writing. one thing id like to point out was that spike was hostile 17, not 12.
n1ghtwing chapter 12 . 1/12/2006
more please!
RTds9 chapter 12 . 4/10/2005
Giles: Who is going to pay for that?

Xander points a thumb at Adam who already has his wallet in his hand...

Adam: Damn kid.. I feel like a father or something... NO.. more like a parole officer.. yeah thats it...

Xander laughs as Adam hands Giles a few bills... Adam glares at him.

lol Even though I'm a huge anti B/X shipper I'm liking this story So update soon
Dnic5 chapter 12 . 4/3/2005
can not wait for the next installment
Grossclout chapter 12 . 3/7/2005
Well, I've read this and the rewrite posted at XanderZone. I really wish you would write more on either one as I like them both.

Grossclout

The Editor From Hell
Desari chapter 12 . 12/11/2004
Awesome story! Um... do ya think maybe Xander could kick Adam's ass a little in a sparring match? I truly adore Methos, but he can be so damned cocky sometimes.
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
CH1

Nice work. It has a good hook and a decent first chapter.

ch2

LOL! Great!

ch3

Nice character development.

ch4

So Buffy didn't even ask about hat a Daywalker was? When did Xander lie to her?

ch5

Great patter.

ch6

Nice addition for a crossover, lacks a bit of detail tho'.

ch7

You're mixing your tenses a bit and you need to watch your contractions.

I prefer prose to script anyway.

ch8

That crossover could have been skipped. It really doesn't add anything to the

story.

ch9

Decent start with Faith.

ch10

The Crow crossover could probably be skiped, but hey it's cool enough

to fit in any story.

ch11

Love the patter.

ch 12

You just got to the good part and stopped?
X-Over chapter 12 . 10/22/2004
Please update this wonderful crossover story of yours very soon. Pretty please? Thank you. :)
Morrolan chapter 12 . 5/25/2004
Buffy is just getting ready to trust him again...and he might screw it up...
And she is stupid for acting like that...I mean she is the Vampire Slayer...Xander is half Vamp...why would he tell her when there relationship had been strained for a while? Update soon.
Morrolan chapter 2 . 5/25/2004
This is a lovely story. I'm trying to read the next part but keeps saying it's busy...gah!
Ta'al chapter 12 . 10/29/2003
Another great part S! Keep updating, loving the multi-XOvers thing you've got going here.

L
lordanhur chapter 12 . 10/13/2003
great keep iut up
Luis chapter 12 . 9/17/2003
Please update this wonderful crossover story of yours very soon. :)
86 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »