Reviews for Tis The Season For Family |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! Nice to see Shield back together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting chapter, I like how you're weaving in facts from RAW/Smackdown into your own world. It's pretty cool. The only negative thing I will say is that you have multiple people talking in a paragraph and that makes the story really hard to read. You might want to try having only one person talking per paragraph. Don't worry that your paragraphs are too small, people won't care. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, interesting start here. I find myself wanting to know more about their past, how they all ended up being abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yayyyy The hounds are back I'm sooooo happy This was a short but really nice chapter Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cooking n cleaning . So sweet The gift from seth are awesome Love it Waiting for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Moms do know the best. The beat down to seth was mean but he deserved it in a way, even though he missed hi brothers n didn't wana hurt them. He could have kept the friendship But finally they are together. Laughing n being a happy family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. They are brothers! So cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter :) |