Reviews for Living Water
Neamhain chapter 9 . 8/3/2017
It was good and well written but there was a lot religious references, maybe you could put something that tells us that in the description? But it's just a suggestion, you don't have to.
TigremiLion chapter 9 . 5/8/2017
A lot of religious references. Be warned non-believers really a LOT. But otherwise, a great story if you just think of it a literature study.
FujoshiAddict2020 chapter 4 . 2/2/2017
Not sure if this was about religion or HaruxOC but i was turned off at all the bible references and stories. Totally blows. -_-
1ToasterKitty chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
This was just... Wow! I absolutely LOVED this! It was expertly written and amazing! Keep being FABULOUS~~~~!
Houshikun001 chapter 9 . 1/14/2017
omg, that was amazing. I love your writing style, characterization, and inferences back to the Bible. This was a beautiful work of art that I've truly enjoyed. Thank you so much.
QueenCeleste 349 chapter 10 . 11/13/2016
Living water is beautiful! You did a wonderful job of keeping a balance of Haru's original characteristics but allowing him to grow as a character within your story. I also absolutely adore Christine!

Oddly enough she reminded me of why I never really looked at the things people did or said in a negative way unless it was bluntly placed before me. It was because I didn't care for looking at that, I looked at their actions as a calculation but never a reference because to me it mattered what I could do to help solve the situation not add to it.

Which is what Christine does. She tries to help not for the mere act of helping but to show care towards others for their sake not her own.

I also love your usage of the Bible and how you brought out the meaning of it all without compromising anything. In fact it adds to the story as a whole in a way that is rarely done!
-Love Queen Celeste
dauntlessmockingjay24601 chapter 10 . 6/19/2016
Although I'm not really into religion, I highly enjoyed this fic. It was well written, and it felt natural. Thank you for writing this.
kittyrawrrawr chapter 10 . 6/15/2016
No chapter 2 . 6/4/2016
Ew what school teaches the Bible, talk about enforcement of religion
Melissa Fairy chapter 3 . 5/19/2016
Melissa Fairy chapter 2 . 5/19/2016
I find it interesting that the topic you're using is not math or science!
Frostfire613 chapter 10 . 5/12/2016
I usually don't like fanfiction that centers itself around the bible and religion since I'm an atheist, but this one was good. Hilarious that the only things Haru can retain is anything related to water! But the best part of it is that this fanfiction isn't trying to shove the bible down my throat like a few others I had read and quickly backed out of.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/11/2016
Cuuute~ I really wouldn't mind you doing a jealous/overprotective Haru thing for this story when Christine's dazzling personality attracts some attention.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/10/2016
Dis too cute~! This is one of the best Free, and all together OC guys I have seen!
LightSpeed Athlete24 chapter 10 . 2/25/2016
... wow. I really did not expect that the somewhat odd combination of genres (?) would turn out to be really nice. :O. And yep. Out of all the Haru x OC fics I've read so far, Christine's looking to be the perfect match for Haru hahaha. Really nice work! :) oh, and can I just say that the epilogue is really adorable? Especially the Skype call. xD
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