Reviews for Living Water
Nawar chapter 10 . 1/14/2016
Holy! This is amazing! I love you for writing this! Thank you thank you thank youuuuuuuu!
Prince chapter 10 . 1/8/2016
Oh my god this was adorable. The only well-written OC story for this fandom, in my opinion. For some reason, I expected Haru to call Christine 'Christ' at one point in time, despite how inappropriate that might be. xD
RoswellianMisha chapter 10 . 11/1/2015
Yay! A great Haru story where a girl actually understands him XD

I love your Haru! I love how I could see him saying and acting this way, and I laughed a lot. Poor Christine! But, they work great together :)
bluefrost15 chapter 10 . 9/16/2015
The BEST romance fanfiction I've read!
I'm religious, and I find this story really appealing.
And I like how you maintained Haru and the others' characters.
I love the comedy part, too~
Even though it's only 10 chapters, it's worth more than 5 books .. :D
Thank you for that wonderful story, Author-san!
Lady Asrai chapter 10 . 8/27/2015
This was brilliant.

It opened up some parts of the Bible which has been quoted at me so many times, but I never understood.

It gave me a whole new perspective on the 'Walking on water' story, which I never understood before.

Thank you for this.

Cypher DS chapter 10 . 8/25/2015
A fantastic story! I really enjoyed the symbolism within your character names (The friend John who leads Haru to 'Christ'ine) and the reflections on the various Bible verses. My favourite part was chapter three and all of Haru's horrified reactions to Jesus' "illogical" actions concerning water. That really got me laughing!
I also have to commend you for your research. Whether it's little details such as lifeguarding exam requirements or biblical quotations there's an air of authority to your writing - that you know your stuff and write from experience.
"Living Water" is a very sweet love story with some excellent extended metaphors woven throughout the plot. I'm glad I took the chance to sink into your fiction and will definitely check out your other works.
Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 5 . 8/4/2015
So, Christine is Christian? Or at least believes in God? I don't think I've ever come across a fanfic that involves an OC who's religious, so I give you serious props for that. And I'm not just saying that - I myself am Christian, and it's nice to read about someone who shares similar beliefs for once. Haha, I love the bantering between Christine and Rose, they're hilarious! Wonderful writing!
Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 4 . 8/4/2015
Haha, wow they become friends without Haru even realizing it. It seems Christine's starting to get the hang of teaching Haru - if not by sticking the word 'water' into every other sentence. She's seriously too nice, but it seems that she's exactly what he needs. Excellent writing!
Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 3 . 8/4/2015
Oh, looks like Christine finally got it right! I can't imagine trying to teach Haru anything - I don't have her saintly patience, unfortunately. It's never been one of my virtues. But, thankfully for Haru, it's one of Christine's! I really like them together, they're so perfect. Amazing work!
Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 2 . 8/4/2015
I really love the way you write - it not only involves a higher level of vocabulary, but also words that help draw a better picture in the viewers' minds. Haha, Haru is definitely a bit of a cynic and I'd totally expect him to skip classes just to swim more. Christine sounds amazing, but oddly enough even though sometimes people write characters like yours and they end up being Mary-Sues, Christine is not one of those cases. Excellent work, I'm very impressed so far!
Keep Calm and Be Ninja chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
Hahaha, wow poor Christine. I'm really starting to like this fanfic! Haru is so accurately portrayed with his obsession with water, and the fact that he even cleans it because it drives him so insane is hilarious XD
Tamani chapter 10 . 7/24/2015
just found this and read it and loved it. awesome story! Amazing work! I may go look at that sequel!
Criala chapter 10 . 7/19/2015
This was such an amazing story. I'm really sad that there isn't more to it! As a Christian, I really, really enjoyed. I wish there were more stories like this around! You did an amazing job, and I hope you write more in the future!
samuraisquirrel chapter 10 . 7/3/2015
The ending was so adorable!~ I enjoyed this story a lot.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/23/2015
This was a very adorable story and I fell in love with it on the very first chapter. And it kept getting better! Your OC was amazingly done and portrayed realistically. Nice job.
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