Yo. littleswimmergirl recommended/promoted your fic so I decided to check it out.
Huh, stories in general with Christian/Catholic (I suck at religion despite being catholic lawls) aren't really my thing but since this is the beginning I guess I'm speaking too soon.
its pretty interesting to read so far, and Christine seems like a unique oc with an actual personality. Haru-pyon is just as spaced out and water-brained as ever. spot on eh?
I reckon I'll stick around and keep reading.
-Aoi (yeah I'm sharing an account with my friend Ryujin Mei . no rules against that hah)

This is a well done fanfiction, it's almost a shame that it's so short, but you paced it well and did a great job with it. I have to admit, I'm not so used to finding so many references to Christianity in fanfiction and it was a little jarring at first. You pull it off really well, though. I'm surprised you were able to make so many connections to Christ and love, and not just keep it to class work. It's clear to see that Christ is a big part of your life, and for you to incorporate it so well into something like fanfiction is worthy of a little congratulations! So congrats! :D

Waaaaaaaah I love the greet one another with a holy kiss ; A;

I love your writing and how you put a biblical aspect into this story. Great job!

This was gold. Loved it!

Aww, such a cute ending to an amazing story! I really enjoyed reading this! :)

Saaah so cute. It's a wonder to see this work, it's very heavy with the biblical themes but hey... You do it well with the cheese.

I loved reading this story. It is very different from most other stories I have read, but in a good way.

I smiled so hard and long my cheekbones and cheek muscles hurt. Then I cried. But in a good joyful way.

HUEHUEHUEHUE FLUFF WITH NAGISA AND HIS WEIRD HAND! Huehuehue

Ahh, this was so cute!
Haha, I can't believe Haru carried her up from the boat and just walked (or fell, rather) right into the lake! Oh man. XD

It was nice to see Christine meeting the other guys though (albeit through Skype :p), and their interaction was funny.
And it was also interesting how Christine and Haru have obviously influenced each other over time. Quoting scripture seems to be Haru's way of convincing Christine to do things. Lol. It's cool that they're gonna meet each other's parents and stuff too.

Once again, what a great story. I loved every minute I spent reading it.

*hides face* No, I'm not crying tears of joy. *violent sobbing* NO NOT AT ALL!

This is literally the most beautiful thing I have read. I can't say anything else about it because it's just...you see? I'm out of words. I can't describe it because it's so goddamn beautiful. Thank you for being the wonderful person who wrote this.

And for also making me smile through our PMs. If you consider writing a sequel, I will be on that thing quicker than my internet can load this web page. So please consider doing so. It'll do good for my soul.

:)

This story is so well written! It's clear that you have a firm grasp on the whole biblical theme, which, while being a bit unusual, was flawlessly weaved into the framework and ended up fitting Haru's whole water obsession perfectly XD His characterization was on point too, and I was constantly laughing out loud at all the ridiculous stuff he did! I loved how every detail came together in the end, and I would also love to see an epilogue. Seriously, I can't get over how cute and hilarious this was haha :) You're a very talented writer!

Aw this was super cute. I really loved Christines character and the spiritual aspect of the story. Made it 10 times better. Haru was so adorable in the end too. I just loved it.

This story was so sweet and I loved reading it. Thank you for writing it.