|Reviews for Living Water|
| Celestial Wolves chapter 9 . 8/23/2014
I think you should follow in Rick Riordan's footsteps and leave it there. If you want to do something with the story afterwards then that leaves it more open than an epilogue would. I would feel a burning desire to make an epilogue, but in this case restraining that might be the road to walk.
| ItsJoy19 chapter 9 . 8/23/2014
I love this story so much! This has to be one of my favourite fics i've read. It is so well written and the storyline is very unique and amazing. I don't think anyone has ever done anything like this before. Please write more stories!
| JustJolola chapter 9 . 8/23/2014
Ahh, this fic was perfect. I'd probably gone past it a couple of times, but I'm glad I read it in the end.
And you're right about this being an unusual fic, but that just makes it all the better. I never thought I'd ever come across something like this in any of the fandoms I like, and I'm really happy that I did. It was written really well, and it's interesting how Haru interacted with various scriptures, and even how he started remembering them.
I'd definitely love an after-the-ever-after chapter!
| JustJolola chapter 8 . 8/23/2014
*falls off the sofa*
Aww, Haru loves her too. X)
| JustJolola chapter 7 . 8/23/2014
asdfghjkl she admitted that she likes [loves!] Haru. O_o
No wonder he was speechless, haha. But I have a feeling it's not completely one-sided, judging from his essay... ;)
| JustJolola chapter 5 . 8/23/2014
It was nice to see Christine's interaction with her room mate. While I didn't really mind it being just her and Haru, it did dawn on me (during this chapter) that it might have been strange not to see her with anyone else at all. Not a bid deal though, just more of an observation.
| JustJolola chapter 4 . 8/23/2014
Well, linking everything to water might not be a conventional way to learn, but it certainly works for Haru. Good thing Christine was both observant and smart enough to make it work. :p
| JustJolola chapter 3 . 8/23/2014
Ahh, man, this chapter was hilarious! Especially Haru's reaction to the Bible references. XD
My sis recommended this fic to me, and I'm so glad she did.
| Tacitamura chapter 9 . 8/23/2014
That was an interesting way of doing your love story. It was the first time I read so many quotes of the Bible but you made it really worth it. Indeed Haruka seems to be a man of few words but great actions, and you really describe his character well.
| No name chapter 9 . 8/23/2014
AWWWWWW! so cute. I loved the whole thing good job. Are you planning on writing more cause it was great? A sequel would be interesting.
| Lucky zetta chapter 9 . 8/23/2014
epilog sound good to me _
| LittleSwimmerGirl chapter 9 . 8/23/2014
Hey, I like the bad Disney sequels. AND THERE IS NO WAY YOU SHOULD BE ALLOWED TO STOP THERE.
Epilogue, epilogue, epilogue-oh you get the point. Honestly, that ending was gorgeous and I do think that that was the perfect place to finish it.
Although, as I said before, I require an epilogue. Because otherwise, my heart will basically stop working from the feels.
| ilovepandasalot chapter 9 . 8/22/2014
AFTER HEAVILY EVER AFTER! I WANNA SEE SOME OF DAT FLUFF! HAHAHAAHAHAAAHAHA! Sides we barely ever have anything hetro in the free fandom. EPILOGUE! EPILOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGUE! XD Sooo sad this story is pretty much done thoooo I luved it so much! This is true love! Between a story and a girl!
| Usagixchan chapter 9 . 8/22/2014
I'd love to see what happens next!
| DarkHybridx chapter 8 . 8/22/2014
May I just say (though this is probably biased, me being a Catholic and all) that this is probably one of the best stories I've ever read. Quite honestly, though I'm Catholic myself, I tend to shy away from stories that involve Biblical references because, unless utilised and executed in a proper manner (which most tend not to do), garner's rather discriminatory attention as well as an unfavourable response from the readers.
However, with Free! being an anime that I watched, I was absolutely fascinated by just how well the incorporation of all the imagery was incorporated. It was just so...seamless. It tied in just that perfectly, at least from my viewpoint.
And may I just take the moment to also comment that the verse from Corinthians 13 totally got me, and I absolutely loved it (haha, how punny).
But in all honesty with not sugar-coating or cherries involved, this is a beautiful piece of literature you have here.