Reviews for Living Water
LittleSwimmerGirl chapter 8 . 8/22/2014
Deep breaths. I need to take deep breaths for a second, ERMAHGERD.

This is literally one of the best things I have read. I don't really want to sound like I'm being patronising or condescending (those words mean the same thing you idiot) but it really is. Haru is completely on point and I'm almost certain that this is how he would react in that kind of situation.

My baby has trouble saying 'Thank you'. Nawww *dies from Haru's cuteness*
LittleSwimmerGirl chapter 7 . 8/22/2014
LittleSwimmerGirl chapter 6 . 8/22/2014
Oh my god, Haru. Your antics never fail to amuse XD.

I really do love your writing. Haru is done just absolutely perfectly, with the forgetfulness, obsessive water syndrome and all. If only I knew how to write Haru so well...
LittleSwimmerGirl chapter 5 . 8/22/2014
Oh no. I have a very bad feeling about this fountain study date. VERY bad feeling.

If Haru is willing to jump into an aquarium, Lord knows he'll jump into a fountain. Well, we can only hope and pray at this point *crosses fingers*
LittleSwimmerGirl chapter 3 . 8/22/2014
Oh my goog Good, I think I'm going to suffocate from laughter.


I seriously love your writing. So jelly, right here. Christine seems like an incredibly generous individual. I like her :P
hazelnuttiness chapter 8 . 8/18/2014
aww... let me just take this review as a chance to tell you that this is a wonderful story you've got here. Biblical reference aside, you have done a wonderful job (being able to incorporate the Bible to a fanfiction, of an anime no less, is something so rare that it needs to appreciated, but I am not saying that we should not appreciate the common things.) Thank you for this. Thank you very much. The story hits right at the heart. I am sorry if I only reviewed here at the second to the last chapter, but even so, I still wanted to show appreciation, and it's never too late.
NoxBlade1254 chapter 8 . 8/17/2014
I really like this story and can't wait for the next update.
ilovepandasalot chapter 8 . 8/16/2014
I looooooooooooooooooooove this story so much. I ship them! I ship a OC with Haru! It's a miracle! I'm serious this is just so well written. I wasn't actually sure if they were actually gonna fall in love or not and that's a good thing! That makes it a bit unpredictable like a real relationship is. Seriously love this!
ayaheartright chapter 2 . 8/16/2014
Good so far but I would like to point out some constructive criticism, hopefully. Christianity is a minor religion in Japan so it would make sense for Haruka to have a very small grasp on it. I also wonder if he would pray to the Christian God or feel compelled to donate 5 yen (or 5 cents) to a shinto shrine. I would have found it funny to have him search around Cali. for a shrine and then end up reading the bible afterwards or something like that.

I know this is listed as a "spiritual" fic and I'm assuming your goal isn't to delve into the Shinto religion but I think it would be a nice chapter to have him muse about both.
hoppik chapter 7 . 8/9/2014
Love's a pretty strong word. e O e
No wonder Haru went a little flipped out.
Good job on this story, it's well written, but I think the whole confession thing was rather fast-paced and sorta out of place. Are you going to introduce any subplots?
Overall this is a piece of smooth writing, and it's a pleasure to read.
Keep on writing. c:
Celestial Wolves chapter 7 . 8/9/2014
I might have to use some of those lines on my mother one day! That was a perfect chapter. I absolutely adored it. The work was phenomenal!
DreamUnicorn247 chapter 7 . 8/9/2014
I like this story very much! Please update soon! :-)
Celestial Wolves chapter 6 . 8/8/2014
Okay so not a Christian or whatever religion you're using but even I can appreciate the hilarity of Haruka trying to learn the bible when all he ever cared about is water. I especially love how your OC is so creative in her ways of teaching Haruka bible scriptures and quotes.

Great work! Don't stop!
kittyrawrrawr chapter 6 . 8/5/2014
im really in love with this!
LilweenGalatrass chapter 6 . 8/4/2014
I really love this fanfic, between the Bible's way of saying things beautifully without falling into the over-religious and Haru's grat way of acting, it's great! :D

I can't wait for more chapters, it's a really great fanfic here! :D

Just a question: will we see any of the other boys from Free! ? :P
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