Reviews for Cloud and Tifa search for a New Heart
dog2222222222222 chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
oh fuck the big titt
ur uder arrest lol biggest tids ive ever seen
big tity FUCK
oneman87 chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
I like your stories please publish more.
Papa Smurf chapter 1 . 11/25/2015
I like the part when sex!
Papa smurf chapter 1 . 11/25/2015
i liek the part when fuck!
What Did I Just Write chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
Please, write more stories like this.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Same
YESSS chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
Every single time I read your stories I laugh and weep and I just... I just love you. Never leave.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
When I live this is artist zingy! Peephole now now the beatuty up Creepypastas.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
You are a troll!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
Hey comicsnix you are back! I missed you sooo much...
wilxy-x chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
Your english seems to be geting better
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
Why Not Try To Revive ZCk.

Cloud x Tifa

Zack x Aerith
Hakitai Hito chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Hm, what do I think of this story? I liked the idea of bringing Aerith back to life, but the execution...isn't very good. I admit, I had only come to see if you were real after watching Bennett the Sage's read-through of The Wolf Blood Lineage. And then I found this...it seems rather insulting to Final Fantasy VII. You didn't spell Bahamut's name the same ever and this story was more than a little creepy. I also wonder if this is actually a troll-fic? Has the thought ever occurred to you that spell check on Word is a very useful thing? Actually, even if you didn't use Word, FFN has spell check as well. If you're actually just trolling people, then you are a very good troll. But, if you wrote this story seriously, then you definitely need to edit everything. Starting with your summary "What if we could resurrect Aerith and bring her to life again". A little redundant, don't you think? Resurrection and being brought back to life are the same in the context of your story. If you would like help editing this story, I'm sure there are people out there who would be willing to help you. Unless, of course, this story was written as a troll-fic intended to make fans mad and others roll their eyes at your poor grammar and spelling...
-吐きたい人