I really like the premise of the story of xcom still working in shadows while going through citadel territory and upgrading/researching techs long the way just like in the game but then realising that's a tag humour and finding out the 'humour' is just this 'comedic relief' character Ilena just completely puts me off. I would prefer this story without that 'humour' part and besides Ilena isn't really funny in any sense and just plain annoying like I wouldn't mind a banter between characters at times which can be funny but having a 'comedic relief' character like Ilena really does not work most of the time unless done absolutely right which in this case didn't. I did read the story a few more chapters in but yea, it just doesn't work for me which is too bad cause I really did like the concept of the story.

I wonder what those asari did to the rachni (if they did anything)

That ending was hilarious

It was smart going to the Volus first. Also your tevos hasn't made me feel very fond but I'm happy she calmed Spartacus down (maybe your tevos isn't all bad, she just didn't like the idea of a another invisible competing matriarch)

Liking the meeting so far

Great chapter! I'm kinda like Jack being pro be allies with the aliens

Great chapter! She's still hilarious and I love her friendship with daro

Great chapter

I love daros interview and the reaxtions

They found them!

Interesting

The interview notes were hilarious

This is awesome! I wonder if they'll find a colony alive

Great chapter!

Great chapter! Wonder if they'll work something out with tela