Reviews for Fate: ZeroNight
BlazeWings chapter 14 . 8/19
Hey man you don't sound like a douche you do whatcha gotta do! keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 21 . 8/15
Pls update orz
Shadow of a Memory chapter 14 . 8/5
Never mind, it seems that the application itself was bugging out on me
Shadow of a Memory chapter 14 . 8/5
Chapter 14 seems like it was cut in half or something
Knight of Steam chapter 21 . 7/13
Very interesting story and I hope you update the next chapter
kabir0399 chapter 6 . 7/5
If you want to see what Iri's character us like, I suggest you watch fate zero
ArmorOfGeddon chapter 16 . 7/1
A story about Shirou being able to clone himself, because he's "made of swords" would be a freaking hilarious crack one-shot. I dare you to write it or at least make a challenge out of the idea!
kewllewk chapter 8 . 6/26
Since when did Touko have the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception? I thought hers were Enchantment.
xxOblivionxxx chapter 13 . 6/22
Shirou can make and spam excaliburs on fate Extra just look out.
xxOblivionxxx chapter 9 . 6/22
Well his feelings foe rin are outplaced and outdated he would be a pedophile. MuaHahahahaha
DannyPhantom619 chapter 21 . 6/20
Hope you update soon!

-Shirou X Harem!
DalkonCledwin chapter 8 . 6/19
Small correction… Zelretch did not choose to become a Dead Apostle Ancestor. He was forced into the position during his battle with Crimson Moon Brunestud, the Aristoteles of the Moon, a being who is both a True Ancestor like Arcueid, and a Dead Apostle Ancestor simultaneously by virtue of the fact that he is the origin of both species!

Crimson Moon infected Zelretch with his taint during that battle, much as he did with Primate Murder, the Beast of Gaia. Zelretch is not a voluntary Dead Apostle by any measure of the word, and if anything can be said about the man, he massively suppresses his innate desire to drink blood.

Oh… oh dear lord… you just indicated that there are now currently in this world… two separate and authentically existing versions of a Unique Noble Phantasm that not even the Gate of Babylon has a replica inside it for…

I’m just going to state what has probably already been pointed out by numerous others by now… but Touko Aozaki possesses the Mystic Eyes of Enchantment, NOT the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception.

Actually… if she possessed the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception like you suggest, then there is quite literally no chance that a Sealing Designation would contain her the way you are portraying her, as those eyes are just as broken as the freaking TARDIS.

Oh my… I see that either the Alaya or Gaia of this universe has decided to stake a claim on Shirou and upgraded his Death Lines to the point where he is much harder to kill, even if he is not yet a TRUE Counter-Entity.

You do realize, that there is only ONE Heroic Spirit who would ever POSSIBLY answer Shirou’s call when he intends to destroy the grail right from the outset, don’t you?

I can already see Amaterasu’s smug amusement at the thought of her aspect being summoned explicitly to destroy the Grail. She might even be willing to lift the power limiters on Tamamo for such a lofty goal as that.

Seriously? You are seriously going to go there… you are seriously going to detail every single day of the next two years, aren’t you? Yeah, now I see why this story hasn’t been updated in awhile. That is a recipe for burnout as a writer.
DalkonCledwin chapter 7 . 6/19
You have a curious habit of typing "thought" when you mean to be typing "taught"
DalkonCledwin chapter 6 . 6/19
Oh dear lord… somehow Kiritsugu managed to completely fail to identify the wielder of the Fifth True Magic. That is not good for him at all.
DalkonCledwin chapter 5 . 6/19
You know… that Servant would be vaporized if Aoko truly wanted to express her ire with Lancer. She is a humanoid Wave Motion Cannon after all. She has vaporized city sized asteroids that were on a direct collision course with her.

Aoko clearly recognizes this particular Lancer for who he is given her nickname for him.

Kayneth obviously forgot that Aoko is the Mistress of Magic Blue… Either that or, he doesn’t actually know that.
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