Reviews for Family Business
Max the Cat chapter 20 . 5/12
This story is beyond ridiculous that I couldn't even complete it and sorry I even started it.

So many plot holes and unrealistic situations. The characters were a little too exaggerated to make up for your lack of storyline.

Makes me wonder what life experiences you guys have and how old are both of you b/c this reads like a bad teenage novel.
lola-cullen-salvatore chapter 20 . 3/30
Loved the story. it made me cry and it made me laugh. It
Patstew chapter 20 . 12/3/2014
Great story loved it! Thanks :D
Guest chapter 19 . 11/29/2014
Stole that day too...i dont think anyone else is allowed to have the spotlight.
Guest chapter 18 . 11/29/2014
Kinda stealing rose and emmetts moment huh?
Guest chapter 13 . 11/29/2014
That was way to fast...just jump into bed together...that will solve everything.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/29/2014
It dos seem like shes trying to buy them...who would feel comfortable with all the money she is throwing around?
Guest chapter 2 . 11/29/2014
Edward is a little shit. Do mot like him at all and if this is how he treats people i hope his business gets taken away
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Cause she can help your rude ass.
irelandk chapter 20 . 11/15/2014
:-)
maphie chapter 5 . 11/14/2014
I have a feeling we haven't heard the last of the Viper.
maphie chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
So many layers to this Bella!
fuz chapter 20 . 11/1/2014
That was a fantastic story!
Thank you.
ChristyWIX chapter 20 . 10/26/2014
Sweet ending . . . with another pregnancy on the way. Loved that all the kids love each other and are so close. Really loved that part about the bullying and how the parents and the school fixed it together. Adored that they all vacation together on the island and that Bella had all the other houses built on it. I really wish Charlie could see his daughter and her family now. Be part of it. Thanks for the story ladies! Christy
ChristyWIX chapter 19 . 10/26/2014
That was a fun chapter. The words she had for the promotions and the second retirement were wonderful. The wedding was super fun . . . he couldn't stop kissing her . . . adorable. Mile high club . . . fun. Finding out she's pregnant on the island . . . fun tip of the hat. The outbursts during Alice and Jasper's wedding . . . understandable, but not so cute. She should've excused herself from the remainder of the service quietly. The wedding party would've understood that, for sure. Would've liked more time with Bella, Edward and their new son . . . we had more time with RxEm's twins than you gave us with their own baby. Onto the epilogue . . .
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