Reviews for Family Business
b3j02 chapter 20 . 10/13
Great story! Loved how fun it ended!
b3j02 chapter 1 . 10/12
Ooooohhh both seem like they have interesting stories to tell.
Vivi H88 chapter 20 . 5/1
Great story :)
amybuck1104 chapter 11 . 2/28
Really!?
amybuck1104 chapter 10 . 2/28
Umm... Are all the people in your life stupid? I'm just wondering because you write your characters as if they have no common sense at all. And the all of the sudden - it's a miracle - their brain starts to function and they actually have brain cells. I know you mentioned something about four chapters to get over this drama, but it seems as if it was completely unnecessary drama to begin with. In fact, I beat you LOVE reality television, well... I hate to break it to you but most of that type of programing isn't real and a majority of their audience has an IQ level that is sad. You'd probably be better off if you stop watching evening "soaps" too! Just saying, your writing would benefit. The beginning of this story was wonderful and then it just went to shit.
amybuck1104 chapter 9 . 2/28
I liked your story up until this chapter. Horrible!
Fleur50 chapter 20 . 10/31/2015
Merci pour cette belle histoire. Lu avec Google Translate. French. Montréal, Québec.
Fleur50 chapter 19 . 10/31/2015
wow!
Fleur50 chapter 18 . 10/31/2015
(:D)
Fleur50 chapter 17 . 10/31/2015
(:D
Fleur50 chapter 16 . 10/31/2015
WoW
Fleur50 chapter 15 . 10/30/2015
(:D
Fleur50 chapter 14 . 10/30/2015
(;-)
Fleur50 chapter 12 . 10/29/2015
Wow
Fleur50 chapter 11 . 10/29/2015
(:D)
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