Reviews for Clarity
Crack-jouchan chapter 10 . 12/27/2015
I feel like punching 'bito everytime I see Aiko wonder about her new eyes. Ugh. Couldn't he have done the decent thing and kept her eyes atleast? Hmph.

He deserves to be humiliated by Aiko (snickers) Hmm... I wonder if there'll finally be a confrontation.
Crack-jouchan chapter 8 . 12/27/2015
Aww, 'bito and Aiko are adorably cute (when he isn't trying to deceive her). They should have more moments like that.

I know 'bito hates Kakashi and all, but when he keeps calling him 'Bakashi', it makes me think of the way Naruto and Sasuke call each other names. It's just so... immature. Bakashi. Baka Kakashi. Eh...

Hahahaha! Kumo is run by an old lady! The Raikage's great-aunt! There's just something funny about great-aunts. I don't know why.
Crack-jouchan chapter 6 . 12/27/2015
Dear, dear 'bito. All he's doing is giving her more pieces of the puzzle, though what picture she'll end up with is up for debate.

And oh my god! That verbal tic! It's back! I suppose it only appears when she gets excited, and Aiko being Aiko, doesn't get excited. Excited over... porn, of all things. Oh Aiko... Atleast I /think/ her interest in porn is more of a clinical interest. I think. She doesn't seem that much of a pervert... Right?

Also, hahahaha! Poor Kakashi.
Crack-jouchan chapter 4 . 12/27/2015
Oh my! Aiko is pretty sharp. She still is, even after losing her memories. Cooool. So she strongly suspects there is more to 'bito than he lets on, but she's gonna play along for now.

He obtains childrens' clothes for her?! That's very unflattering. But it might explain the 'pretty, bright colours'. Also, her hygiene is gonna become horrible now. She doesn't remember how to comb her hair, much less bathe?! Oh dear, oh dear.

HAHAHAHA! He stole Konan's shoes for Aiko! Hahahahaha! Oh my god!
Crack-jouchan chapter 3 . 12/27/2015
Ooooh! So her memories are still there! But I wonder what'll take to unlock them? Like she mentioned before, seeing Shizune didn't help, and Jiraiya only frightened her.

Her life /was/ a mess. She was suffering from guilt complexes, moral dilemmas, and... Well, life seemed pretty bleak, really. Poor girl, it isn't her fault she's upset that noone visited her, and yeah, under normal circumstances, what are the chances? She couldn't remember anything and to be suddenly dumped somewhere where noone says something like, 'How are you? I was so worried!' is pretty damn depressing.

I'm not gonna comment on 'bito's assholery because we all already know he's an asshole.
Crack-jouchan chapter 2 . 12/27/2015
Wait... The Rinnegan restores to 'the state they were meant to be'? So... It probably means that the memory loss wasn't a fluke. It was because of her unusual circumstances of being reincarnated into the world of Naruto. She was supposed to be reincarnated without the memories of her original life. But this might mean she'll never recover her memories.

And oooh, I stand corrected. The inked seals are still intact. And wow, Jiraiya is actually on the right track, even if he was joking. So Aiko had more spiritual chakra, but perhaps with Rinne Tensei it made it such that that extra, misplaced chakra was gone. And that extra thing was... The memories of her original life, if going by Tsunade's theory. Though it seems that it might have just taken away all her memories previous to the point two days ago. ...this whole thing is a headache.

And Tsunade didn't tell anyone short of Kakashi that she lost her memories. Well. It'll be a mess and a half if she ever encounters them again, then.
Crack-jouchan chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
Wowwww. It's been two years? So her physical age is seventeen now?

It's almost like a clean slate, really, because her amnesia means she forgot all the things she knew and learnt, and all the seals, including the inked ones destabilized when she died the first time.

Nevermind that she's helping 'bito, I think she's really cool, going about like a badass secret agent!

Uhh... Maybe 'bito should have warned her about Konoha, because she is hardly wary about revealing her identity to them! Then again if she kills them afterwards... Oh well.
Dreams of Shadows chapter 24 . 12/9/2015
It's finished? Wah?
chris678 chapter 11 . 11/25/2015
Didn't they diagnose her with amnesia, why are they guessing at genjutsu or a seal?
Guest chapter 24 . 11/18/2015
I can't believe I finished it. But I have to congratulate you on your amazing writing. This story, and the one before it, took me on an emotional roller coaster (I cried more than a few times), and I haven't read anything better. No other fanfiction has been able to make me laugh, cry, squeal, and shit myself (out of excitement) all in one chapter. Thank you, for taking me on Aiko's journey. It's much appreciated.
Guest chapter 24 . 10/14/2015
I'm totally salty about this being the end but as you are the creator of this magnificent story that I have finally finished, I can respect that choice. I seriously enjoyed both the fics and have to commend you on being able to hold my limited attention through over 100 chapters which rarely ever happens. Keep on writing xx
Arafell chapter 3 . 10/10/2015
The hated phrase 'idiot ball' comes to mind.

I'm suspicious of all these people who claim to know me! Lucky this sketchy ninja's here to help me out!

It's understandable that without Hiraishin she couldn't escape him, but I would've expected more suspicion.

Hopefully this is all a setup to gain Rinnegan.
VolvicBabe chapter 24 . 9/27/2015
fml
Church017 chapter 24 . 9/12/2015
If you really are done, you should probably add the 'complete' tag so people don't get their hopes up for more. That said, I really hope that you make more for this universe. I enjoyed it.
briose chapter 2 . 9/11/2015
I hope that my review won't be perceived as purely anger of an unsatisfied reader. The amnesia is such a sucky way to continue your story. The plot could have gone in so many different directions yet you choose the easy way out. You could have made her take over Danzo's network and show how all her experiences led to a mature personality by making an even sneakier heroine. Yet on that front there is minimal change. You would think that after so many bad experiences Aiko would show a change in the way she acts. You may argue that her personality slowly changed over the story but personally I think the changes were way too minimal reported to all that happened to her. Her amnesia is so frustrating. Like you decided to abruptly kill her and introduce a radically different mc. I think in part this development is to show us the readers how the other characters mature but I personally hate it that you decided to realize this in the cheap way. Radically changing the main's character personality is so frustrating. Especially since I came to quite like her. I'm so angry so I apologize if my rant hurt your feelings. Summed up my review say a heroine with amnesia sucks !
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