Reviews for Clarity
Guest chapter 17 . 4/20/2019
"Wait. Was this a date?"

That line killed me LMFAO. xD It'd be funny if she actually blurted it out. Just imagine the awkwardness.

Come to think of it... amnesia and reunion? Sounds like one of those convuluted plots for incest. *wiggles eyebrows*

Just kidding lol. Great chap.
animecutylover chapter 15 . 4/4/2019
Yikes. I wonder if Aiko will even be okay and actually get her memories back now.
animecutylover chapter 3 . 4/3/2019
Obito sure can lie. Lol.
animecutylover chapter 2 . 4/2/2019
Jiraiya is right on. And Tsunade and him definitely almost got it! Damnit!

Poor Kakashi. He’s blaming himself again.
Seraphy64 chapter 1 . 3/15/2019
I love this fic.
Akatsuki Aiko is superior to Konoha Aiko. I found myself wanting her to resist Konoha more tbh. She's just more fun and whimsical. Besides all they want is to use her.
Bit weird at the end when her eyes start messing up. She had them for months and didn't have that many problems. Then even after Sasuke treats them it only takes her rubbing them a bit to inflame them and all but blind her?
Nagato had those same eyes for years and we never heard of him having any issues.

I was half expecting Aiko to make use of the blind reverence those Ame nin showed her and become the kage of Amegakure. She had Konans support too.

Just feels like you ended it too abruptly and didn't wrap lose ends up.
mangomangocat chapter 24 . 1/9/2019
I absolutely loved your story.
colormeconfused chapter 24 . 12/24/2018
Heyy great read, bit of an abrupt ending but eh at least you have one... that being said, will you be marking this story as completed ever?
AlrightioMightio chapter 12 . 10/24/2018
this is the second time im reading this story start to finish and I'm at the point where you kill off fuu and extract her bijuu and it makes me want to hate you for doing it in that way because she's my favorite character but I just can't because your one of my favorite writers
Emrys315 chapter 23 . 10/12/2018
Oh... what happened to her student? And her cat? Hinata still have that? Also is she gonna revive B? That would help relations.
But really there are a lot of loose threads and I'm sorry if you got bored with this story. But I sat reading this while a hurricane smashed up my town. I was holding out for closer.
Emrys315 chapter 24 . 10/12/2018
Ok so no pairing? All that and she didn't end up with kakashi? The first story was marked kakashi/oc but nothing? The closest she had to a relationship was her date with tenten. For someone who reads porn she sure didn't try catching anyone's attention. Sure she agreed to go on a date with Tanzo, but there was like no buildup. Nothing romantic or relationship buildup.
Your story is good and interesting, but I had high hopes for kakashi and now I'm bummed.
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 17 . 9/19/2018
Aiko is going to loose it if they keep up the babying
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 16 . 9/19/2018
I love everyone's confusion
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 15 . 9/19/2018
So much happened in this chapter
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 14 . 9/19/2018
Glad aiko is getting away from obito
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 13 . 9/19/2018
Like all the jitsu aiko is learning
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